• Member Since 16th Jul, 2018
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Naptime


I just really need a nap.

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Well new this is shaping up to be a very interesting story, at least it's off on a good story. I really like the main protagonist, he seems to be a very dashing, I wonder what he will discover about the secrets of this apparently ruined abandoned.

Well things seem to be taking a strange turn for the pore colt, I wonder what will happen next for him?

Hoping for more!! I really like it so far!:raritywink:

Neat I wonder what will happen to our charming protagonist next.

Keep it rolling! Loving it!:raritystarry::rainbowkiss:

Awesome chapter, loved the level of descriptions you put into this chapter and the other chapters. Looks like the ghosts or whatever is trapping him there sense even his dreams and memories are being altered, now he really is caught in the spiral of that place. Now I wonder where this is going to lead next, already he seems to be growing younger and has practically forgotten that he wanted to escape this place.

Honestly I was hoping the little colt would end up as a little filly or sissy but wonderfully written none the less. Keep it up hun.

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