Ever since Luna got back from the moon, she's been... readjusting to modern day culture. And Twilight has been all too happy to help. At least until Luna discovered something called the 'Pun'.
Now Twilight is convinced Luna punning right and left is the end of Equestrian civilization as we know it. She's overreacting... right? Well, yes. Probably.
Now, the only question is what will happen first, a punderstorm of lunar proportions or the meltdown of a liberian? Personally, if you were to ask Spike? Pass the popcorn.
Featured on 6/15/19 and on 6/16/19
Chapters (1)
I was expecting a purely humorous story and I got a heartwarming tale instead. Good job!
It start with a very humorous way and ends up in a life lesson. Nonetheless it's a good one shot.
The beginning actually remind me of this story. One I recommend you should do a review.
The characterization was good and the puns groan-worthy. The main issue I had was that it feels like something is missing at the end, because I didn't see what would prompt Luna to ask about bowling.
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Yeah uh... I admit I just ran out of puns there at the end, so I just went for something off the top of my head, meaning it was truly bad even by pun standards. I also admit there was a line there I meant to add in but didn't. Fixed now
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Yeah... Uh, I personally think this was one of my weaker pieces. Bit of a rush job, actually. And yeah, I'll have a look at that one.
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Good thing you have almost a month to polish it still, then, eh?
Part of me sees that title and wishes it said, "Cattleclysm" and wishes it will feature a heard of angry cattle.
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You're a man after my own heart...
Are we going to see anymore rom-com herd stories?
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Depends on if I feel like doing them. And I'm not sure "Meeting of the Marefriends" counted as a 'herd' story per se.
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If it were Spike and the CMC?
For one shining moment, we had the Punnisher.
Kudos on your story.
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Listen dude, I'm not here to write romance with every story. I write what I want. If anyone happens to enjoy the writings, that's fine, but in the end, I make the final choices on what is and isn't written in my portfolio.
Every single pun you made in this story caused me to groan.
I love it.
This was a heart-warming little story. Honestly though, I expected more puns and hijinks.
verry punny
Wait a minute, this is wholesome content!
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I know right? No gay horse stuff from me for once.
Kind of a pity, really; I can imagine Luna having tried to get Twilight to laugh with pun after pun... eight in a row, nine... but no pun in ten did.
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I can't stand the punishment! That didn't even tickle my funny bone! I was on cloud 9 and fell back down to Earth! Yeah, I'll cee myself out.
Enjoyable. A pun story that doesn't pun-ish the readers. We see a pun-ctual Twilight that catches up to her mistakes and has a friendship lesson.
... and I can't think of another pun-pun. So this pundit says bye-bye.
Lol that title😂😂😂
If only Twilight could tell Cat Noir this and get it through his thick skull😅
Make a sequel. Specifically a crossover. Lets see who's worse Luna or Cat Noir and lets see who kills themself first Twilight or Ladybug😥
You know what's harder than writing a good feghoot? Writing a good feghoot with heart. Bravo.
Hey. I thought it was funny.
Definitely cute! Need a sequel!
Yeah! Miraculous bronies!
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Silence_EXE,
Well… puns don’t mature until they’re “full groan!”