• Published 12th Jul 2019
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Fun Time, Bad School Time: Anon-A-Miss - Rachel Michelle Light



Sunset is getting tired of school by getting picked on, so she hangs out by herself at Sugarcube Corner and she does something with her appearance.

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Fun Time (Edited)

Fluttershy and Sunset are resting together at the nurse's office while waking up from her nap, then sees Sunset sleeping beside her while letting out a smile. She gets up from the nurse's bed to stretch her arms, back, and legs. She's still feeling bad of leaving Sunset behind when she needed them the most and starts tearing up. She begins to wake up Sunset from their recover nap, "S-Sunset wake up." Fluttershy said quietly. Sunset woke up from her recovery nap while stretching her body. As she gets up Sunset sees her friend in tears, making her so worried, "Flutters, are you okay? Don't cry, I can give a second chance." Sunset encouraged.

"I-I can't t-take that offer." Fluttershy sadly disagreed.

"Why? I made stupid mistakes because I thought that everything about friendship was a waste." Sunset explained.

"DON'T BLAME YOURSELF JUST BLAME ME, I'M..." Fluttershy said loudly but was given a hug by Sunset, "Why, I left you all alone."

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"I don't care what happens as long as you're here." Sunset explained while hugging her friend. Fluttershy couldn't long her tears any longer. She continues to cry, so Sunset is calming her shy friend. Nurse Redheart is talking with Vice-Principal Luna because her sister is filling out a stack of papers and unable to answer, "WHAT, are they alright!?!" Luna panicked.

"Please calm down, miss Luna. And yes, they're fine." Nurse Redheart replied, "I had them checked up, don't you worry."

"*sighs* thank you, so please take care of them and take them to the principal's office," Luna ordered, ending her call.

Nurse Redheart placed her hands on her face *sighed* and gets up from her chair to check on Sunset and Fluttershy. She's going to check on them twice to see if their injuries have healed. Luna is trying to maintain peace with all of the students and she's sweating a lot.

The nurse checked on Fluttershy's left cheek and seems fine, "Well you two are healed, can please follow me to the principal's office? Don't worry, you're not in trouble." Nurse Redheart clarified, which confused Sunset and Fluttershy.

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They followed Nurse Redheart to the principal's office to talk. Sunset and Fluttershy make their way and knock on the door, "SUNSET, are you okay, who did this, please tell me!" Celestia panicked while running up to her.

"Whoa Whoa calm down principal, I'm fine, sure I did get bruised a little bit, but thanks to the nurse, I'm fully recovered," Sunset explained.

Celestia takes a deep breath, then hugs Sunset. As she calms down, Tia sees Fluttershy with an injured cheek which made her worried. she heads back to her desk to discuss what happened with Sunset and Fluttershy, "Okay now, tell me what happened, both of you please?" Celestia asked Sunset.

She told her principal about the injuries that she received and her attackers were Rainbow Dash and Applejack.

"Now, why did they attack you?" Tia questioned

"Like everyone, they wanted to teach her a lesson just by attacking with no second thought," Fluttershy replied.

"So miss Fluttershy, what made you change your perspective on Sunset being Anon-a-Miss?" Tia asked.

"I thought she was, but it seems that I'm an idiot. You have the right to be mad at me." Fluttershy said, disappointedly, "I wasn't able to speak up to anyone."

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"No No No, I'm also the one who failed. Although I am disappointed in you for not sticking with Sunset's side but I forgive and won't punish you this time. Tia replied.

Fluttershy is surprised which she begins to tear up and collapses on her knees, crying. Sunset stood next to her, wrapping her hands around her. Tia feels bad, seeing one of her students feeling guilty, so she decides to let them skip school while dealing with Applejack and Rainbow Dash.

"Girls, maybe you shouldn't come to school tomorrow after everything has happened and I can't take much more of this. All the posts, broken friendships and this anon-a-miss user is the cause of it. I'll tell your teachers that you're skipping classes, have a wonderful day." Tia said depressingly.

"Thank you and to you as well," Sunset replied.

As both Sunset and Fluttershy left her office, Tia started to shed tears because the whole Anon-a-Miss situation is tearing her apart and doesn't know what to do. Luna comes back with no sense of progress, then sees her sister begins to tear up, "Sis, are you alright?" Luna asked.

"NO, EVERYTHING'S NOT ALRIGHT!! IT'S BREAKING THE SCHOOL DOWN, OUR SCHOOL AND I CAN'T DO ANYTHING ABOUT IT!!" Tia cried tearfully, "Every post, every disconnection, there's always chaos and it won't go away. I can't take it anymore, just... make... it... stop."

"Oh sister maybe you're right, even I couldn't maintain peace with all the students. Even I'm powerless as well." Luna thoughted. She didn't say anything, just standing right next to her placing a hand on her shoulder while looking disappointed.

After hearing the conservation, Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo are getting worried about their whole scheme 'cause even they didn't know how they broke Principal Tia and Vice-Principal Luna but not in a good way.

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Sunset and Fluttershy went to Sugarcube Corner to just eat and relax. Sunset ordered a chocolate muffin and a original lemonade and Flutters gets a cup of hot cocoa, eating their tasty treats.

They finished the snack and went to the park, creating snowballs to have a snowball fight, but Sunset throws her snowball gently which pleased Fluttershy. They both created snow-angels while looking up to the big blue sky. Both her and Sunset are listening to songs like DS Cheep Cheep Beach and Overlook Mountain which Fluttershy enjoys listening to and having a big smile on her face.

As they arrived at the apartment, Fluttershy settled herself inside. She still keeps on thinking about it but let it slide. Sunset asks Fluttershy if she wants some leftover snacks in her fridge, which she says yes. They reheat and ate leftover pizza and breadsticks. Sunset was eating a jalapeno pizza because one: it's spicy and two: she's vegetarian, while Fluttershy eats a plain cheese pizza 'cause she doesn't like animals being killed.

They also finished their leftover snack, both of them like to chill out until Sunset asks Fluttershy a favor, just one simple favor, "Fluttershy, can you..."

To be Continued...

Author's Note:

Second chapter, enjoy.

Mario Kart 8: DS Cheep Cheep Beach

Paper Mario: The Origami King: Overlook Mountain

Comments ( 36 )

.....Still interested but its not as good as the first chapter.

Comment posted by diablo4000 deleted Feb 16th, 2020

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I did asked and to do that is to complete this story, then fix it. I'm always three steps ahead and I might quit the whole writing site with every negative criticism thrown in my way. It always gives me pain. :(

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Yeah sorry about the negative comments,if it came out too harsh.
The idea is still interesting thou despite the grammar, it was a twist to see Celestia break down as she did, but it makes so much sense.
So much pain and misery is coming from the Anon A miss mess.
I'm still put off that the Rain Bitches did what they did, and still hope for them to get arrested or sued.

I'm am glad the CMC over heard what happened, and maybe maybe they fess up or something.

Love to see this when the truth comes out Apple Jack, Dash and Rarity are blamed for all this and even accused of secretly knowing and allowing this to happen.
Since it was the CMC behind everything, can see them get accused of that, and be a great twist to be on the receiving end of being accused so easily.

Pinkie...just tell Maud on her, sure she drag Pinie by the ear to their mother and father.

Comment posted by TheShadowKnight deleted Aug 13th, 2019
Comment posted by diablo4000 deleted Aug 13th, 2019

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HEY, please stop, it makes me annoyed to see a fight.
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If you don't stop, I'LL QUIT THIS SITE F.O.R.E.V.E.R, PERIOD!!

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Okay I’ll stop. Just don’t go

Still want more.

Comment posted by Rachel Michelle Light deleted Sep 1st, 2019

can you please make more chapters. this is really good

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I'm usually do good on chapters one and two, but on number three gives me more stressed. I really appreciated your support, but the negative criticism on this site has been breaking me so bad. I'll think about the third chapter and continue on it, thank you. :)

Everything is underlined and in bold.


Why is everything underlined and in bold?

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I do capitalism in every sentence.

i dunno if this will be continued, but i'll keep checking for updates

I liked your story. I am sad that it has ended due to negativity. Going to follow and hope you will try writing again.

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Still recovering my problems with negative criticism.

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Aw. Ps this is actually a very good story and I hope you continue it soon.

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I hope, but if it doesn't then those negative criticisms will come after me.

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Then you ignore them.

"NO, EVERYTHING'S NOT ALRIGHT!! IT'S BREAKING THE SCHOOL DOWN, OUR SCHOOL AND I CAN'T DO ANYTHING ABOUT IT!!" Tia cried tearfully, "Every post, every disconnection, there's always chaos and it won't go away. I can't take it anymore, just... make... it... stop."

Ok, if I had saw this in the comic I would have liked Celestia more, because in the comic it just seemed like she was kicking back and relaxing. Also, why didn’t you start the chapter off as a continuation of the last chapter?

After hearing the conservation, Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo are getting worried about their whole scheme 'cause even they didn't know how they broke Principal Tia and Vice-Principal Luna but not in a good way.

If I were them I'd kill myself. [Please help me]

Is this story getting continued?

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Yeah, I need my family's laptop to be fixed.

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Looking forward to spreading! Glad to see you return!

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Thanks for the comment, I will continue to improve myself and read new different stories in the future before the virus is gone.

This is a cute story and very touching. I hope you decide to continue it. :twilightsmile:
You could ask a friend to edit for you - sometimes just that second pair of eyes helps with the little mistakes. :raritywink:

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