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The Fat Man


Nice, keep it up!

Comments ( 75 )

Well, that started off rather silly!

{Could use some punctuational cleanup tho}

9751935
Yes, It did start off pretty silly!

I'll get right to work on the punctuation.

I am profoundleel disappointed in a lack of an eelegant pun here. :p

Exotic saddles cost more than normal, but considering the work he did I think he covered it.

why am i enjoying this so much?

lmfao, do continue. xd

9774999
I'll get working on the next chapter.

I'm glad you are enjoying it!

Things might get silly.

Shouldn't there be a comedy tag, then?

9807713
You just had a big brain moment, I'll put a comedy tag for the funny bits. Thank you for commenting!

I like this guy. That said, feel free to be note liberal with the periods. Shorter sentences help with the pacing.

This just gets better and better.

9808144
Thank you for commenting and for your grammatical advice, it's much appreciated!

👍

I see the banana-apple wars are beginning in the comments. But before it goes further, let me just say: 🍅
The superior fruit.

What what? Retconned his last name? It's not Monkey?!

9808181
It's a war that has spanned a million years and there is no clear winner in sight.

I think that bananas are better. But in a pie, the apples win there, or pears. Pears are also good

9868396
Ah, someone mentioned pears, outstanding move. Thanks for leaving a comment!

What's peregrinations mean?

9893752
MUHAHAHAHA, with the power of google I bestow upon you the definition------> peregrinations- a journey, especially a long or meandering one. Thanks for leaving a comment!

This chapter left me thinking wtf /)

9931496
Haha yeah, It do be like that sometimes. Thanks for leaving a comment!

9931668
No prob if u ever need help im always lookin to help

Oh goodness, this story is great! Looking forward to more c:

9934282
What a positive comment, I appreciate it! Thanks for commenting!

9934809
Big Brain moment. Thanks for commenting!

He’s not even gonna ask about Hugo?

9945717
Hugo is a tough monster lizard thing he'll be fine...probably. Thanks for commenting!

I'ma be real with you chief, I'm still enjoying this story. Looking forward to more as per the norm.

9954823
I appreciate it! Thanks for the commenting!

Damn. Got jumped by a tumbleweed. That takes a certain kind of skill.

My favorite mythological monster: the carbuncle

9992711
Thats really awesome actually, Thanks for commenting!

9997980
A bit more on the carbuncle: there's so many conflicting descriptions about it aside that it's a smol animal with a gem or mirror on its forehead. There's so many interpretations to it, from d&d to final fantasy and granblue fantasy, and espeon from Pokémon is based on it.

9997993
You see thats what I had trouble doing. I looked it up but there were a lot of different depictions of it so I ended up at the pokemon one😂. Thanks for commenting!

After going through that he should be happy that his slacks are soaked only with sweat

10164702
I agree! Though it would have been quite funny with the other option too. Thanks for commenting.

9986458
The best kind of skill If I do say so myself! Thanks for commenting!

9893934
Dude, yes,Thanks for commenting!

10213389
Nothing much, I'm getting back on writing the chapters and they're coming along great! Thanks for commenting

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