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Dude.... get a proofreader.
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Totally. I thought this was an elaborate troll fic when the spelling and word choice kept getting worse.
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I'll take a good look at it.
I did keep finding more and more problems the more I looked, wrote it all on a cell phone over a 14-hour shift. So there's bound to be some problems, but I'll see about fixing it up. Thank you for letting me know.
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Eeeeeyup...
kinda happens on a 14 hour shift when you have almost no connection and only a cell phone to type with...
Sucks ass don't it?
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It does.
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Thank you, I'm sure future readers will appreciate it
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Yeah... lots of mistakes can be made... it's not the end of the world... just gotta put a little effort in. A bad auto correct will ruin a lot of things.
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will there be a follow up? id like to see what happens next.
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For a while I thought about just turning all of this into a big file of raping or molesting Twilight in various forms, human, anthro, pony, and whatever else. But I don't know... maybe I will.
The way Shining mentally justified his actions made it extra creepy, well done!
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^_^
That was the intention, it's hard to get into the headspace of someone who does something like that, but the more immersive the story, usually the better it is.