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When Equestria is commandeered by unknown assailants, the Crystal Empire stands alone as a bastion of defiance. It's up to Twilight and friends to pick up the pieces, hold the front lines, and take back what they hold so dearly, before the Empire is taken too. And with almost all ponies thrust into a new way of life and suddenly unable to communicate, is it even possible to accomplish?

Time is ticking.

Written originally as a 1000-word entry in GaPJaxie's third Quills and Sofas Speedwriting Competition, where it won fourth.

Thanks to Lofty Withers for editing.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

This was nicely done! A bit confusing, but that just added to the mystery element. I loved it!

Unusual, and greatly enjoyable.

Man, this is the perfect opening for a story: just enough mystery to draw attention, but just info to also draw people in.

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Thank you! I hope you'll be back for more :raritywink:

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All will be resolved in due time, I promise! Sincere thanks for the feedback :twilightsmile:

I loved this story. Please continue!

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Hey there, thanks for the fav and for enjoying! Chapter 2 is currently in the works -- hopefully I can get it out soon :)

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