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When my dad died, I started a new life. Then, he came back.
Seventh place in the October 2019 'Friendship is Short Shorts' Writeoff, "Crossing Over." Also written as part of the SFNW October event. Happy Spooptober, everyone!
Thanks to Syke Jr and Lofty Withers for editing. Where would I be without you absolute legends.
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Poor Gabiru chan. Was this a catharsis piece? Stupid question.
Bad trip, huh.
I wonder if daddy was this sort of nasty person before his death, and Gabriel's professed dependence was caused by a toxic relationship
Note: edited for brevity and it was all spoilers
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It really reads like he had personal experience.
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You'd be right about that.
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And maybe also about that *sweats nervously*
Thanks for reading and commenting, it means a lot! :)
Ayy I really liked this! Especially when the bit about poison joke was brought up.
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Thank you! The idea for poison joke came from Baal Bunny, so props to them :)
Well, that took a bit of a twist. So much so, that the dad being dead wasn't even the dark part.
What a interesting story and concept. Good work