Twilight and Rarity decide to put a foalhood rumor to the test.
Edited by Undome Tinwe
This story is part of the First and Only Raritwi Bomb: A week's worth of stories and art all centered around Rarity and Twilight. If you liked this story, the previous story posted was Tactics by Rose Quill, and you can find a master list of all Raritwi Bomb content Here. 
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Since the mare never hurted them, would they try again, but this time smile and wave back?
That was truly frightening!
And really cool!
Very creepy.
I 100% Nightmare Night Approve this.
Rarity, there are dozens of things which aren’t true or are impossible that you see or do on a weekly basis. But Bloody Mane is the one that will finally turn out to not be true?
Honestly, you’re like a leather-clad apocalypse biker, convinced that they’re the one who will finally take down the Fist of the North Star.
Good story! The way I see it, monsters like the Bloody Mane are drawn to Twilight due to her magic, similar to (Hi)Kari in Digimon with the Dark Ocean.
Twilight and Rarity were written well.
Good stuff. If there was a sequel, I wouldn't argue.. >~>
I was expecting it to end on Mane kvetching at them for summoning her for no reason.
Biggiesmallz… biggiesmallz… biggiesmallz…
"A pop culture reference," stated Discord, who'd been watching the whole thing from under the bed, where he was lurking as a monster ready to gobble them up when they fell asleep.
The screaming began again... Spike sighed and wished he was the one making Rarity scream like that. By also eating her. In the non-hot predatory way. Because Halloween needs gore or else the giant monsters will rise from the sea and destroy us. Sigourney Weaver said so.
Nice short story, good work.
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Lol
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A sane man would be confused by the idea that there's any other kind... which is why I say that sanity is for the weak. Which isn't even at odds with Lovecraft, hilariously enough.
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9877761 Who needs sanity in this crazy world?
Funny ending, but I could see Twilight getting even more curious about it and trying to study the phenomena that is real for her and just an urban legend for everyone else.
I know what Twilight says at the end, but we ALL know what she’s really going to do:
And then the next morning, Twilight brought all of her science equipment and started molesting her bathroom mirror... while Rarity watched on and got off.
Nice little one shot, though I was hoping Twilight would ask some questions and investigate further...
This was good! I'd love to see a sequel!
A light horror story. That’s why I don’t play with urban legends
Great story! Both family-friendly and also horrifying. The writing is good, the characters are likable, and the dialogue is really good. I do realize that Bloody Mane is based on Bloody Mary from urban legends. However, I haven't tried to say her name three times in the mirror where it's dark, and I don't want to because I get scared easily and I don't want to know what she looks like.
Five out of five stars.
Thank god for that punchline, cuz you had me in the first half. D:
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Some versions of stories I've heard are typical, saying she has long dark hair and wears a white dress drenched in blood. Others say she has a lifeless figure and has her head tucked beneath one of her arms. There are so many variations of the story, so you don't have to worry about finding out what she actually looks like. Although, Queen 'Bloody' Mary did enjoy her gore and torture...god, she was a brutal queen.
bloody mare-y