• Published 23rd Oct 2019
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Children of the Moon - WinterFang



Princess Luna pays the CMC a surprise visit

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"It won't be that much longer little ones." Said Luna as laid on her bed feeling her foal gently move within her.

It had been months since the baby shower and Princess Luna was able to get thing prepared for day daughters arrived. She had put together a nursery and asked Twilight Sparkle to take for a while. Once she was in her final month of pregnancy, Luna's doctor had confined her to bed rest. Luna didn't argue and been held up in her room for four and half weeks as she continued to enjoy the sensation of three fillies move inside her womb. Luna suddenly felt an odd pain in her midriff. It only last for a couple minutes, but it was long enough to tell the moon princess that she was going into labor.

Luna called her guards to summon the doctor quickly. News of Luna being in labor soon reached Celestia, who jumped out of bed and rushed to her sister. After what seemed like an eternity, Luna's first foal was born. She could see that it was Apple Bloom. The reborn filly had taken on some of her new mother's features, like the wings and horn. She also had a similar coat and mane color to Luna's. The only thing betraying what Luna did, was Apple Bloom's former colors were supinated in a very unique way. This gave the moon princess the idea to name the former crusader 'Nebula'. The same thing happened to Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle. Their coats and manes had changed colors to match their mother's. For Scootaloo, her former colors occasionally shot through her mane and tail like stars, giving her the name of Star Shower, along with a horn. In Sweetie Belle, the colors moved and danced, thus giving the unicorn turned alicorn the name of Aurora.

Once everything was said and done with, Luna and her foals were left alone to rest. Luna was able to whisper a soft 'Thank You' to the former crusaders before gently falling asleep from exhaustion. As the newest mother slumbered, a single tear of joy rolled down Luna check while a small smile was on her lips.

Comments ( 2 )

I would like to do or have a story done of me somehow coming to Equestria as a human female from the USMC as a sniper . My squad were killed and I am the last survivor . Bleeding from bullet wounds keeping the enemy at bay , I begin to weaken losing my strength , I lay with my pack and equipment when a Taleban with a big ass sword comes towards me and is about to chop off my head but suddenly the Lunar sword appears in my hand giving me strength to fight . Grasping the sword in both hands I fight him, and counter his strikes untill I find my opening and kill him by shoving the Lunar sword through his chest and out his back severing his spine killing him . ( To Continue ) Would this story be interesting ?????

I think you should reformat this in to a one shot whit som time stamps instead.
It would propably read beater that way.

Other whys it is a cute story and I will read more.

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