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It's been years and he's yet to grow. Spike wants to be with her, with Twilight, but knows... he isn't right for her. Only, she's been hanging with too many stallions not right for her. The bar mostly. Not like her. Will Spike bring her home safely?
He's a coward, and assistant, for her alone.
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This shit is kinda sad, poor spike having to watch as the mare of your dreams go to someone else for awhile, being rediculed for looking like a kid and in a span of a night it changes
That leads to some confused thoughts
Dammit!! I'm tearing up man!! This is good!!
I dont know what you were worried about. This is great.
I liked it. The cliff sucks, but it for the plot, so it's cool. Looking forward to the next chapter!
If I were Spike, I would've gotten physical with those stallions earlier on.
Hope to see the next chapter soon!
What a magnificent start! Amma fav this and wait for more!
hope to see this continue
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Aye. It will. Just caught within commissions.
Thank you for reading what I have of it, so far.
~ Yr. Pal, B
More?
Hope to see this updated soon.
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Count on it.
~ Yr. Pal, B
Hell yes! Great job, B!
Glad you found the motivation to continue and finish this story. A clop chapter will be great appreciated later. But pleassssse, no micro! Spike is small enough as it is! And the thought and act of him getting a mare of Twilights size off is pretty hot, and strangely cute!
Again great job!
Now if only a story about a Princess and Duty would continue!
This was a great read. I look forward immensely to the day we read the next part of the story.
I swear I had the "you're my little teddy bear" song from Chitty Chitty bang bang go through my head as i read this.
Well... it was not what I expected, but the ending feels right.
If in the future you write the "sexy part" I'll sure be back.
Okay, I don't know if you meant it to be taken this way, I'm almost sure you didn't, but from the cues I picked up, this statement literally translates to:
"I'm going to fuck around for as long as I like, with anyone I like and when I'm bored of having no romantic relations and all the meaningless foolery has carved a hole in my heart that demands stability, I will go to you, despite knowing all the while that you loved me first, and I love you as well."
Sounds a bit depressing if you roughly reword her statement.
But....... isn't that exactly what she's doing? No offense but, fancy reasoning for horrible actions doesn't negate the fact that you just did something bad, and her behavior is awfully similar to a borderline psychologically abusive girlfriend....... Curious here.
As for the abusive characteristics, there were at least three but I'll analyze on of the more. Prominent ones.
See here, she depreciates HIM. She knows the problem and basic sense would dictate that if you cared about someone you'd gently let them down, thank them, reprimand them, then thank them again, the compliment sandwich, psych 101.
What she wants is control, so what she instead does is depreciate his sense of self and attempt to divert his attention from her disastrous actions, to his own, then tries to make him feel lesser than he is for doing said actions, despite the fact that they were done in goodwill.
Additionally, she preys on his weakness and them reinforces her attempt with an emotional appeal, thus enhancing the effect of her criticism.
Throughout this chapter she does this over and over and over and frankly, I'm surprised you created a Twilight so far gone by mistake.
.....
Wait wait wait.
So, Apparantly, she got drunk one time, propositioned Spike for sex, and somehow it's his fault for not having sex with her while inebriated?!?!
Is she a narcisstic psychopath or something?
Gotta hammer in his weakness to establish proper control.