To Their Destruction

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MixMassBasher

MixMassBasher #1 · Nov 11th, 2019 · · · Gentlecolt Red Grouse ·

Very thrilling. The poetry. Though I don't recognize the style of the first chapter.

Ice Star

Ice Star #2 · Nov 11th, 2019 · 1 · · Gentlecolt Red Grouse ·

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free verse, my dude.

NaiadSagaIotaOar

NaiadSagaIotaOar #3 · Nov 11th, 2019 · 3 · · Làir Fhlùraichean ·

This is really interesting. My first thought was that this could’ve easily been prose, and maybe I would’ve liked it more that way, but the whimsy rhymes and chipper tone actually lend a lot of character to the narration. It really makes me picture the kelpie as an adorable little nugget, even if she does snack on ponies now and then, and I love it. And it sorta scratches that evil fish horse itch i’ve... had forever and basically never done anything about.

You are doing good work by writing fish horses snacking on notfish horses, is what I’m saying.

Ice Star

Ice Star #4 · Nov 11th, 2019 · 2 · · Làir Fhlùraichean ·

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it ain’t much, but it’s honest work. 👉👉

Dulset Tarn

Dulset Tarn #5 · Nov 11th, 2019 · 1 · · Gentlecolt Red Grouse ·

Oh hey, that picture is my OC kelpie! Not that I mind, I love your work~. Everyone should know more about kelpies!

Ice Star

Ice Star #6 · Nov 11th, 2019 · · · Gentlecolt Red Grouse ·

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Oh! I didn’t mean to use any art of yours and can change it if you want.

I’m glad you like it, though. C:

Dulset Tarn

Dulset Tarn #7 · Nov 11th, 2019 · 1 · · Gentlecolt Red Grouse ·

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Honestly I might have better art you could use~. That one in particular, I don't remember where it came from. I think a friend commissioned it for me, heh. No need to change it for me.

Ice Star

Ice Star #8 · Nov 11th, 2019 · · · Gentlecolt Red Grouse ·

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If that's the case, then I'll keep it up now that I have your permission. Generally I just scout artist's pages to see what they allow. I've sourced/credited the picture if you'd want to check it - all I was looking for was an atmospheric kelpie picture, and yours gave this little tale the final inspiration it needed.

MrWolfeyes2