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omg i love this x3 the story, the tension, everything in it... its a good foalcon with depth and story to it ^^
So what do they do? Do it all again!
Is there going to be a sequel to this where their kid is a little bit older ?
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Like so many young parents do, and then they'll complain on facebook XD
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I had no plans for that, i'm afraid. But i did entertain the idea that at the end they'd have sex again, he knocks her up and gives Angel Cake a baby sister. Plot twist, the siblings don't get along XD
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Ok
Really great storytelling, especially for a foalcon piece. I genuinely enjoyed reading all of it!
The implications that incestuous babies are not very uncommon in Equestria just opens up the shipping floodgates, huh?
I am... Intrigued.
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)
Nice Work, didn't expect such a Story From you. And you may have indirectly helped me.
And a Error i found, if you don't mind.
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They do, but rarely so fast; or at least, her body wouldn't be ready that fast. I'll put it down to the differences between magic ponies and real people.
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Thank you :) And good spot on that error. fixing now
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You're Welcome, i make the same Error From Time to time.
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flankbook. Its a wall that pegasus sit on and complain about ponies who are particular pain in the side
Really good story. Loved how you wrote how everyone went through their mental struggles, and what it meant for two young Fillies having their first Foal at such a young age. I was disappointed with Cup Cakes reaction to handle the Foal Pumpkin and Pound were having, yet it was completely understandable. Really sweet how everyone came together and was supportive of each other in the family, and their friends as well.
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Thanks :) And yeah, writing the scene where they told their parents was the hardest part for me as I didn't know how to go about it at first.But i gave it my all rather than "hey maa, i'm preggers, lol". didn't quite have the same ring to it XD
Perhaps you could do another young couple story who doesn't care about wherever they did it.
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Well that's always possible. Never say never. :P
I love this story so much.
I'm kind of dissapointed that there aren't really any full length stories about this topic. The closest things are the Pounding Pumpkin series which is discontinued, and a set of CloudFlitter stories.
Like seriously, I'll probably be the first to admit that I really don't care at all about most taboos concerning love, and this story show why sometimes looking past the taboos can be worth it.
I left a rather lengthy comment on a incest documentary that had some pretty toxic comments on it, and most of my feelings surrounding incest is summed up there if you feel like hunting it down, but basically incest is perfectly fine if it's consensual between both parties and they're all aware of the consequences (or in this case willing to live with them).
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Thank you. :) I'm so happy you liked this. And I agree, love is love, no matter who its between as long as its consensual between both parties. :)
This was absolutely amazing and had me in tears by the end. Thank you for writing & sharing this.
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Oh I'm so happy to hear that. :) I really wanted to push for that heart felt sweet happy ending and it makes me proud to have touched someone in such a way :) Thank you
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While I have no problem with incest love and actually even find it cute/hot, I must remind people that having incest babies in real life is a big no-no. It leaves very heavy consequences for the babies. If it's fiction, it's fine. If a real life incest couple find and adopt a baby, it's fine. But please don't encourage people to have incest babies in real life. It's hurtful to the babies.
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Oh I completely understand that and wasn't trying to encourage anything by my statement. Love is love, but one shouldn't actively engage in procreation with a sibling irl. It's not just a social taboo, forget that, but there's a chance (a strong chance) that you and your sibling could have recessive genetic disorders passed on from both your mother and father, and you'll have them, and so will your sibling have the same ones. Because of that, there's a 1 in 4 chance that if the siblings have a child, it could be born with the genetic disorders active because the recessive genes got stronger. If you had a child with a non family member, those odds drop from 25% chance to 0.333%. So that's a great reason not to have a baby with your sibling. As you said, if they REALLY want a child, just adopt! There are plenty of children out there who need a home and loving parents.
plutonic
/pluːˈtɒnɪk/
adjective
1.relating to or denoting igneous rock formed by solidification at considerable depth beneath the earth's surface.
2.relating to the underworld or the god Pluto.
So, maybe platonic way.
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Huh, well whadda ya know. Fixed it. Thank you :)
Well that was fun.
a amazing masterpiece bravo! good show i would never in a million years have read such a interesting story like this along with the situation between the 2 siblings
the confusion
the heartbreak the Guilt and so forth felt well made was beyond perfect
including the s3x scenes between the to siblings where caught perfectly and balanced well tho i wish there would be more chapters or story's maybe a prequel nahh im asking to much never mind me im just writing :P
at the end it all worked out
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Aww, thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. As messed up as some of the stuff I write gets, this is hands down one of my favourites :) I've not got plans for a sequel, prequel or anything but the idea of building more of the world, more chapters adding the Apple's point of view along with a conflicting family that completely against it has come to mind. However, I'm sure I wouldn't finish it, so I feel this story is at it's best as it sits, right now. :)
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no matter how messed up or weird the story is it gets better and interesting and I'm glad i can give feed back to other writers of this awesome website
and for the Apple Family's POV sounds actually pretty cool and interesting
how will granny smith react?
what are the feelings between both Apple jack and BigMac and the other family members or there friends and the community
if you ever need any recommended idea's just let me no! glad to help
any Who enjoy your day!
I always assumed Applebloom was Aj and Bigmacs foal, and this was cute as heck a bit of a clop fic but cute none the less thanks