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Betcha she wants this non-stop.
Aw man! It ended just when it was getting good!
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Don't worry. Note the "Incomplete" tag
I think the story is born from these pic, you can find on derpibooru too
https://e621.net/post/show/2010165
https://e621.net/post/show/2110948
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Yeah, the commissioner seemed to ask for the story to follow these pics
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and this pic LINK
Hey, I think you forgot to put in a /i or i somewhere cause a good 1/4 of the chapter is italicized when I don't think you meant to have it that way.
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Uh oh
I'm guessing somewhere in Ponyville, Spike now has a hyperactive penpal as his personal maid.
Should not call Silver sea pony if she use hippogriff form. It kinda confuse how sea pony have claw...
So which pervy couple or harem is next?
wrong name
Lol nice story, loved it.
Alright, interesting start. Slavering is quasi-mainstream/socially accepted, so there's no real chance of escape. Having the owner be the bubbly Silverstream is an unexpected change from the trend of grim and cruel, but very much appreciated. And having them be old friends in a new kind of relationship adds an extra layer to the dynamic. Let's see where this goes.
The story is good, though I think I like the premise even better. I've been looking for stories about legalized sex slavery, but most are too dark for my taste. This seems to have the perfect tone for my liking. Aside from a few too many typos, I'd say my biggest complaint was that there wasn't enough screen time on the world. How exactly does this work when sex isn't in session? How do the other characters feel about it? Etc... It'd be nice if this could continue and explore these elements.
This is nice
Your use of tenses is beyond weird. You need an editor.
The fan fiction is well written, but after reading it, I wanted to strangle the author of that Silverstream, and not because of BDSM, but because of fucking slavery, it's just disgusting