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LunaAlpha


Alicorns Forever!

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The Vox are ponies that can change into anything or form and they capture Princess Luna and hold her for ransom. When Princess Celestia finds out and she calls the Main 6 to help her get her sister back without paying the ransom fee.

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This is pretty neat so far!
I think you could use an editor--the pacing is pretty quick.
But I think I'll keep track of this. :twilightsmile:

The next morning Celestia woke up at 6:00, and noticed that her sister did no lower the moon. She went to her room and found a not on the bed. She read it.

It's spelled "note", by the way.

Rainbow Dash is two words, fyi.
Seems like this will be a cool adventure story! :)

The Vox are ponies that can change into anything or form

So... What's their relationship with the changelings like?

10161401
I do enjoy it when they apply what they learned.

I will probably have another chapter by the end of this month. sorry if i write slow

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The Vox are ponies that can change into anything or form

So... What's their relationship with the changelings like?

10200963
ok thanks
umm..... lets just say that their great-great-great-great-great-great-grandmothers were sisters

10161401
how do you make someone an editor?

10255657
You can go to this group:
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors
and then just create a thread asking for editors. Here's a place to look if you still need help figuring it out: https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors/thread/127527/how-to-request-an-editor

10255691
on some of the threads it has a link to go to the story. how do you do that?

Well I like the idea but I see a couple things. First doesnt Lunas body go into the dream realm with her? I could be wrong about that though. Second, only 3000 bits? If you're gonna ransom royalty you dont go small. It should be in the MILLIONS at least.

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