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Buttery Biscuit
*dances the dance of Italy oh-hoh-oh* OASIS! 3 Mile Mark! This is what it means to go EVEN FURTHER BEYOND! 00:00:00
Buttery Biscuit
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EDIT: Also, you probably should put “just” before “pick up”.
10155426
Oh you are right! I'll have to fix that. Thanks.
Is the Tomb (grave) being a substitute to Tome (book) intentional in the title? I could see it working if so.
10155596
Yes it is on purpose I'm glad you caught that I wasnt sure anyone would.
I enjoyed your story. Good luck with the contest.
10155705
I was about to ask the same thing before I checked the comments.
Very clever.
10155867
thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it.
10156003
thank you
Thanks for submitting this! I look forward to reading it.
10156169
I hope you like it!
Space the text walls out, separate out dialogue.
It's a bit of a eyesore in this state.
Edit: autocorrect
10164986
What the what? How do you space the text walls out? And I have no idea what desperate the dialog means. I'm sorry. I gave it a shot anyway I hope it's better.
10165028
Ah, autocorrect. I mean separate.
As for how, it's hard to explain-but I see you've already fixed it.
Nice 👌
10165072
Oh ok cool! Thanks for your input and help so my story could be improved I appreciate it! I'm glad I could figure it out :)