Wow, I am loving this first chapter; a fun and gentle beginning that leads you nicely to the more saucy and juicy chapters afterwards.

I think Celestia inadvertently channeled her inner Aladdin for a moment there. ;)

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I was thinking Falkor the luck dragon.

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Hehe, a mare and her man. The press will be on uproar!

Oh riding princesses is tight

That looking away at the end kinda diminished the impact

That flying scene was beautifully written.

“Beautiful, isn’t it?” she sighed, remembering how small the capital had one been - what felt like eons ago.

“One been”. should be “once” presumably?

Beautifully written flight scene. It reminded me a bit of that scene in The Prisoner of Azkaban where Harry flys with Buckbeek.

Why is it that writers here 90% of the time use Anon for the name of the human in question even for erotica? from what I read looks good but the over use of anon keeps me from giving it a thumb up.

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Because it's an Everyman concept that doesn't require much slogging through character introductions?

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Not really. Shows that both are feeling it, but being confused and uncertain about what exactly 'it' is, they look away, rather than confront it immediately.

Special. But nice. But...special... xD

I absolutely loved this.

Let's see what the next chapter brings. ;]

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Only God's eternal love for His creation can top the love between an anon and his mare.

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What str8aura said and also Anon is an established everyman character—we don't need to reinvent the wheel. From my perspective, using Anon instead of an OC human is what made this one of the few HiE stories that I enjoyed. The OC human stories spend too much time establishing their human character and become repetitive: it's like Harry Potter fanfic that starts its protagonist as a first-year student when the meat of the story doesn't happen until they're in year 4.

Somebody’s a fan of a certain YouTube channel. Good story so far.

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That flying scene was beautifully written.

I'm going to have to add to this.

It wasn't just beautifully written, it was magnificent. Leech captured, the majesty, the emotion, the bond, and the elation forming between the two.
This was pure joy to read.
Leech, thank you for sharing this with us.

Ok this was a beyond interesting and fun beginning I can't wait to see where this is going.

This is an honest surprise, very well written even though I feel like I've seen it done a few times before. Really though, this bit caught me off guard.

Funnily enough, adapting to his new life had been super easy, barely an inconvenience

Lol. I see you're also a fan of Pitch Meetings, or is that just a coincidence?

This was interesting.

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Finding himself in a land of talking and oftentimes magical horses was strange enough, but the last thing he’d expected was to be taken in by one of the rulers of the land. Funnily enough, adapting to his new life had been super easy, barely an inconvenience - at least, after the initial shock of it all. The denizens of Equestria were all unbelievably friendly and good-natured, making him feel welcome wherever he went.

Magical Talking Ponies are Tight!

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Loving ponies is super easy - barely an inconvenience!

neglecting the slack reigns in his

reins

For a fleeting moment, the literal blink of an eye, a feeling of weightlessness greeted him, although it ended in a flash. Gravity swiftly took hold, sending his stomach into knots, as their bodies plummeted towards the earth so far below.

Uh... if they are in free fall then they ARE weightless... The feeling of weightlessness is due to being in free fall.

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Fuchur, the name is Fuchur.
Damned US Censorship.

Haven't even gotten a fourth of the way through this story, but I can already tell it's gonna be good.

Oh, references to obscure YouTube shows are TIGHT.

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Yeah, it was was super easy, barely an inconvenience.