Underneath The Sycamore

"Lying in a field of glass,/Underneath the overpass,/Mangled in the shards of a mental frame,/Woken from a dream by my own name." -Death Cab For Cutie, 'Underneath The Sycamore'

Gallus sneaks out of the dorms into the night and is found by two of his friends, gazing up at the stars. To their surprise and confusion, he's been talking to his parents.

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SpikeSmolder fan

SpikeSmolder fan #1 · May 18th, 2020 · · ·

That was beautiful, both heartfelt & awesome!

Thanks for sharing!

Closer-To-The-Sun

Closer-To-The-Sun #2 · May 18th, 2020 · · ·

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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I was honestly have doubts about how it came out, but I'm glad to see positive feedback!

Ocellus The Changeling

Ocellus The Changeling #3 · May 18th, 2020 · · ·

Awesome

Stinium_Ruide

Stinium_Ruide #4 · May 18th, 2020 · 1 · ·

Touching, and the fact that the grammar is mostly clean makes this story a pleasant read. It is a fundamental reminder that genuine friends stand with and for you throughout your life challenges, even though they may not be able to lend much help other than moral support, which may be pivotal in reality.

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