Forests and Cabins

EStadiums and Bleachers
MLP: FiM
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At an empty stadium, Rainbow finds meaning.
Rainbow Dash
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Fiddlesticks · 1.4k words · 32 0 · 500 views

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Forests and Cabins

This story is a sequel to Platforms and Tunnels

In an empty forest campsite, Rainbow finds faith in the pony who raised her.

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VampDash

VampDash #1 · Jun 17th, 2020 · 2 · · Helpful Aid and Lemonade ·

I'm assuming this means the next one is gonna be her Mom.

Vis-a-Viscera

Vis-a-Viscera #2 · Jun 17th, 2020 · 3 · · Helpful Aid and Lemonade ·

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Her mother was the story previous, I think.

Next might be Rainbow Blaze, her instructor.

Vis-a-Viscera

Vis-a-Viscera #3 · Jun 17th, 2020 · 2 · · Helpful Aid and Lemonade ·

Beautiful story as always. The impact of location in MLP is so often overlooked it stands out when someone can give it some much tender care in so few words. And the mannerisms of Hothoof, while a bit different from how he's normally portrayed, gel amazingly well with the passover that Rainbow Dash is doing throughout all of your ficlets.

I look forward to seeing where Dash's boulevard takes her next.

Dashie04

Dashie04 #4 · Jun 17th, 2020 · 2 · · Helpful Aid and Lemonade ·

I wonder if these stories are even written in chronological order. This seems to happen a lot earlier on the timeline than the others ones.

Otherwise, not much new to note here other than the fact that these stories aren’t labelled ‘slice of life’, which implies there is something otherworldly or supernatural about them. I’ve also noticed that Fiddlesticks has stopped liking every comment on their stories, it probably doesn’t mean anything, but it’s interesting nonetheless.

EDIT: Noticed a reference, Sun Twi, a person who asked Fiddlesticks to chat.

DawnOfsnow

DawnOfsnow #5 · Jun 18th, 2020 · 2 · · Helpful Aid and Lemonade ·

Another really good one! I really like the fun relationship Dash has with her Dad. It’s heartwarming. Anyway, I’m still wondering why she’s in the human world. Or at least a pony world with human stuff like cars, malls, highways and things like that. I also I liked that at first she couldn’t hear the birds anymore, but then as she left she heard one again. It was a sweet detail that I don’t fully understand, but I liked it nonetheless. I wonder who’ll be on the mountain.
I really thought the chapter after Spike was gonna be Starlight, so I’m wondering if that’s who’s next. My three guesses are Starlight, Scootaloo, or possibly Spitfire (even tho I can’t exactly see Spitfire offering anything other than tough love, it could happen)
Who do y’all think will be next?