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AntiBronyBenSwolo


I might as well be the only Anti-Brony here. Anyway, I also like Star Wars :P. P.S. Tari is best Duck Nerd

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Friendship has spanned the entire world of Equestria for a good Thousand Years as it had brought the Earth Ponies, Pegasi, and Unicorns together once before, and now it has brought Ponies together with creatures from around the globe, all thanks to Twilight Sparkle. But now, Twilight is put to the test when she receives an encounter from someone not from their world.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 54 )

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So... do you want more of my help ?

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If there's anything I need help on, like figuring out where I should take this story, then I'll let you know. Thank you for your help :)

Twilight found herself gazing at the Earth from out into space.

Twilight took a deep breath and looked out at the planet.

if you want the map
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/212221/world-building/thread/404527/new-new-equestria-map-and-eqg-map


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U.R.W.C.

as Cosmica had another bite of the pie

writing a southern accent is hard :(

Use FunTranslater !
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You want to Fight ?

to

yawl wonna fite ?

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Gosh darn it, why do I keep missing the reply button all of a sudden? :P

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yore uh silly Pony

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Wait, does it only translate "Everybody" to "Everypony"?
Thanks anyway.

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I don't know how well it does

"Stop putting skunks in your story, or draw 25"
I think I'll draw 25, thank you.

https://imgflip.com/memegenerator/UNO-Draw-25-Cards

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I gotta admit, I did not see that meme coming. Thanks :)

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This may or may not be what gave me the idea for Cosmica in the first place.

So far this has been a nice slice of life story

Now we get into a bit of adventure I hope you continue this story

Dang it! I made S.M.I.L.E. to protect Equestria, AND SOME FLANKHOLE TURNS IT INTO THE MARES IN BLACK!!!

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I thought S.M.I.L.E. was always Mares in Black
XD

S.M.I.L.E. was originally supposed to be REACTIONARY not PREEMPTIVE.

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Wouldn't it make more sense to stop a threat before people even realized they were in danger?

Let me rephrase this; S.M.I.L.E. was supposed to support peace. THE CURRENT LEADERSHIP IS BASICALLY TELLING THE UNIVERSE “HEY, CRACK OUR WORLD ON SIGHT BECAUSE WE ARE EQUIS-NATIVE SUPREMACISTS!!!”

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"The current leadership" as in Twilight's in charge of S.M.I.L.E.?

No, Twilight not knowing about this means she is not to blame. I left Fleur De Lis in charge, but she apparently resigned while I was gone. THE WORST PART IS, I DON’T KNOW WHO SHE LEFT IN CHARGE SO I DON’T KNOW WHO TO BE MAD AT!!!

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Well, you know, fanfictions do tend to depict things differently, so maybe your version of S.M.I.L.E. is a whole lot different than this one.

I’m not mad because S.M.I.L.E.’s pourpose has been perverted, I’m mad because I WASN’T THERE TO PREVENT THIS IN MY DIMENSION, AND NOW I’M SEEING IT REPEAT IN THIS ONE!!! AND IT LED TO INTERGALACTIC WAR CULMINATING IN THE DESTRUCTION OF EQUIS IN MY DIMENSION!!
Edit: I refer to different FiMfiction universes as “dimensions”.

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Edit: I refer to different FiMfiction universes as “dimensions”.

I mean, I prefer the term "universes" but to each their own.

Yet you ignore the fact that I’m from a dimension where S.M.I.L.E. DOOMED ALL OF EQUIS!!!

saw this and thought you would want to see it

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Wow. I never thought I'd hear the history of space aliens in a Disney Cartoon.

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That's not all !

it's 52 minutes long,

but you can tell it to go 2X
so... 26 minutes

that's fine you get there when you get there really the more important thing I find is that if the author enjoys writing the story I enjoy reading the story

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Thank you so much for staying tuned. It means a lot that people will still be able to check it out.

Are all the aliens in this story going to look like ponies?

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I'm not sure, honestly. So far, Cosmica's the only one we're seeing at the moment.

"Then there's only one way to do this," Twilight said, lowering her magic shield. Just then, Twilight's horn lit up and cast a magic pink and purple cloud of smoke around Cosmica, herself, and her friends. Just then, Cosmica felt woozy, as did the other ponies, as one by one, Twilight's spell put the seven ponies to sleep.

what was the point of that, Twilight could have just said deal with it because as far as I can tell S.M.I.L.E is not acting in the same way the M.I.B do which means that they really are not properly conducting their operations I mean seriously kidnapping!!! twilight has every right to tell Lyra and Bon Bon to cut it out even if she apparently has no jurisdiction over them as a person being harassed for no reason and as one of the people that can be considered the proper authorities not to mention the fact that Twilight is far more powerful than any unicorn I know throwing around power is something dictators do but with how Lyra and Bon Bon act S.M.I.L.E doesn't even seem to self regulate which is a serious issue.

there really needs to be rules for how they are allowed to act(also no matter what S.M.I.L.E agents says you can bet that Celestia knows about them with how long she has lived and the fact that if they tried anything to erase her memory there would be a day that last far too long or the sun would take too long to rise I just have a feeling that Celestia just puts up with them.)

"Now wait just a minute! Just because you explained a couple of things to Cosmica and upgraded her ship doesn't excuse the fact that S.M.I.L.E. has been operating under Celestia's nose, and now my nose! I demand answers of my own here!" Twilight said as Fresh Prince shrugged off the Princess's dissapointment.

yeah I don't believe that for one minute, Celestia is too old and has lived too long for something like this to slip under her nose not to mention where S.M.I.L.E's funding is coming from I think these agents are a bit deluded if they believe Celestia doesn't know about them

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what was the point of that, Twilight could have just said deal with it because as far as I can tell S.M.I.L.E is not acting in the same way the M.I.B do which means that they really are not properly conducting their operations I mean seriously kidnapping!!!

1. Twilight figured they only needed to talk to Cosmica, not to dissect her
2. She also figured S.M.I.L.E. will just keep coming after Cosmica unless she got this over with.
3. For S.M.I.L.E.'s sake, she cast the sleep spell so that the organization can still keep the location of their hidden headquarters a secret while they negotiated.

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Which is another reason why Twilight has every right not to trust S.M.I.L.E. as well as what they want with Cosmica.
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On the other hand, though, they're led by Will Smith pony.

Hey, how come we use tranq darts instead of sleep spells anyway?"

for None-Unicorns

We are the Ponies In Black

Haha Will Smith Pony go brrr.

https://imgflip.com/memesearch?q=brrr

I wonder what the Space Skunks are officially called in universe. Also, REALLY S.M.I.L.E.!!! YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO MAKE PEACE, NOT WAR!!! I am also curious of what Cosmica’s species is called.

You can call me Fresh Prince.

Pfft, THAT is what my successor is called? That’s dumb even by equestrian standards!

"Ah, looks like you Cloptrians kept it a secret too after all,”

Cloptians? What’s their planet called, Cloptria?

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