I was tempted to hold this chapter back and release it along with Chapter 4, so you wouldn't get a clopless update, but I figured leaving it with a bit of intrigue wouldn't hurt.
Also, big BIG thanks to whoever recommended this story on Hypnochan, I owe a ton of this story's views to you.
Wow, Ditzy certainly didn't last long. I wonder if it was because of her naive nature, or maybe it was her boss and he nabbed her when she came in for work.
1258207 It might be that she was in a relationship already, and it was her partner who got to her. That could make any changes difficult to detect at a cursory glance.
Also: Somehow, the idea that impregnation is noted with a sound similar to an oven.. with a bun inside.. is adding insult to injury.
I think our little Ditzy gave it up on purpous perhaps to a sorten Dr.Whooves? then again....eh wishful thinking maybe becuse i'd like to know to Dinky does have a proper daddy Anywoo brillient chapter wish you the best of luck
I know how you feel. I'd like to get a new chapter out as much as everyone'd like to read it. University has just been taking up a lot of my time recently.
I assure you I am steadily progressing, but for now, I can only apologise and ask you to be patient.
It's not dead. However, at present, I'm managing to write about a sentence a day. I just tend to be exhausted after Uni, or have an assignment to work on instead.
Rest assured, I'm already over 2000 words into the next chapter. The wait shouldn't be much longer, I hope.
I was tempted to hold this chapter back and release it along with Chapter 4, so you wouldn't get a clopless update, but I figured leaving it with a bit of intrigue wouldn't hurt.
Also, big BIG thanks to whoever recommended this story on Hypnochan, I owe a ton of this story's views to you.
Wow, Ditzy certainly didn't last long. I wonder if it was because of her naive nature, or maybe it was her boss and he nabbed her when she came in for work.
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It might be that she was in a relationship already, and it was her partner who got to her. That could make any changes difficult to detect at a cursory glance.
Also: Somehow, the idea that impregnation is noted with a sound similar to an oven.. with a bun inside.. is adding insult to injury.
wonder who got derpy...
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Here's hoping for Twilight to be next.
Seriously, I liked this chapter. Ditzy's state giving everypony that false sense of safety (just a bit, i know)
I think our little Ditzy gave it up on purpous perhaps to a sorten Dr.Whooves? then again....eh wishful thinking maybe becuse i'd like to know to Dinky does have a proper daddy
Anywoo brillient chapter wish you the best of luck
Aww, what? We didn't get to see Derpy getting eliminated? I feel cheated, good sir!
UPDATE!
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I know how you feel. I'd like to get a new chapter out as much as everyone'd like to read it.
University has just been taking up a lot of my time recently.
I assure you I am steadily progressing, but for now, I can only apologise and ask you to be patient.
This is wrong and sick and weird and I'm following it!
I hope this hasn't died... That'd be a crying shame. We were just getting to the interesting revelations, after all!
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It's not dead. However, at present, I'm managing to write about a sentence a day. I just tend to be exhausted after Uni, or have an assignment to work on instead.
Rest assured, I'm already over 2000 words into the next chapter. The wait shouldn't be much longer, I hope.
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Ah, I know that feel. Just wanted to make sure, and now that I have, I'm happy^^
Stuff is about to go down, I can feel it. I don't like that feel.
Noooooooo ditzy doo/Derpy hooves!!! -changes personalities- You humans! How could you do this to such an innocent creature!
WHERE DA BUCK IS DR.WHOOVES? *pulls out a rubber chicken with derpys face on it* LEMME SMACK SOME SCENCE INTO DAT TIME LORD!
This story is reminding me so far of the Hunger Games, except as a sexual version.
Heh, just got an idea of some kinda tentacle monster being the final boss. And it tastes like grapes.
didn't dashie get captured last chapter why aint she preggers?
3543922 it was a dream basically
3160199 me too