I am SO sorry about the delay on this chapter guys. I knew University would limit my free time, but I wasn't aware of just how inconvenient my timetable for the first semester would be.
So yeah, I finally motivated myself to spend a free day writing this. I'd like to say updates will pick up after this, but who can say? I'll do my best.
Loving the story, though i think the prize at the end is gonna be Discord... if yo ucatch my meaning (if he likes the mare I guess) or i could be SO wrong but who knows (Part of the fun is guessing if your right or wrong! ). happy to see your back!
Gentle breeze guide you home, a warm smile to keep your home warm.
The telling of Ditsy's tale was great! You could really get a sense of how she thinks and views the world. And yes, her plan for solving this problem make some sense... Not to mention, I'd already sort of guessed it last chapter^^
Now: Time Turner didn't seem to be one of the... "Infected" males. So, not all of Ponyville's stallions were turned, assuming Discord didn't lie and none of them are, of course. How do you then differentiate between a hypnorapist and a normal? How much are they in control of themselves? Are they capable of planning in advance, or will they simply pounce? Or perhaps it changes on a case by case basis; making it even more difficult to keep up your guard up. For that matter, Ditsy didn't change too much either (or so it seems), so perhaps the precise nature of their enslavement also changes according to the mare. In other words, whoever knocks up Pinkie might not stay as happy (or sane) as we first thought...
1658501 That's certainly a possibility! It'd fit perfectly with Discord's sadistic nature, that's for sure.
1668485 I hope Rainbow Dash wins because Twilight sucks giant monkey balls. Twilight Sparkle: "It's all true!" Anonymous Human: "Hell yeah it is, BUT WITH HUMAN BALLS! Get to sucking, you dirty whorse!"
The solution is so obvious. Instead of worrying about being impregnated by any stallion and/or colt that can put their piece into the puzzle, Ditzy and Golden basically said "If we are going to have sex with someone and be enslaved with that pony for the rest of our lives, why not just have sex with our husbands who already love us so much?"
Wisdom and intelligence are not necessarily hand in hand: Twilight is so intelligent about trying to stop Discord that she completely misses the obvious solution. It's like trying to figure out how to climb the stairs because your leg is tired, and you just realize that the building you are in has an elevator or two. Talk about awkward.....
Also, I wonder if Ditzy's second biological foal is going to be a colt. Dinky already has an older sister, let's give her a brother!!
Comment posted by demolish238 deleted Mar 29th, 2017
This was my very first thought when the rules were announced a few chapters ago.
My second thought was for her to say: Now repeat after me. "Tell me every detail of the contest, and what you think I should do."
Shortly thereafter, she'd be involuntarily surrendering all the details of the contest, and Celestia would be swiftly contacted, and everything would get sorted out. ^_^
Discord would either be impressed by the loophole (being the lord of chaos and all) and figure out some other delightful way to torment them, or he'd be all petty and just pull out the husband's vocal chords or something.
Well, I just wrote over 3000 words in 4 hours.
I am SO sorry about the delay on this chapter guys. I knew University would limit my free time, but I wasn't aware of just how inconvenient my timetable for the first semester would be.
So yeah, I finally motivated myself to spend a free day writing this. I'd like to say updates will pick up after this, but who can say?
I'll do my best.
glad to see this is still going
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Why couldn't spike be one of the stallions then twilight would have had a stallion worthy of her affections.
Loving the story, though i think the prize at the end is gonna be Discord... if yo ucatch my meaning (if he likes the mare I guess) or i could be SO wrong but who knows (Part of the fun is guessing if your right or wrong! ). happy to see your back!
Gentle breeze guide you home, a warm smile to keep your home warm.
The telling of Ditsy's tale was great! You could really get a sense of how she thinks and views the world.
And yes, her plan for solving this problem make some sense... Not to mention, I'd already sort of guessed it last chapter^^
Now: Time Turner didn't seem to be one of the... "Infected" males. So, not all of Ponyville's stallions were turned, assuming Discord didn't lie and none of them are, of course. How do you then differentiate between a hypnorapist and a normal? How much are they in control of themselves? Are they capable of planning in advance, or will they simply pounce? Or perhaps it changes on a case by case basis; making it even more difficult to keep up your guard up. For that matter, Ditsy didn't change too much either (or so it seems), so perhaps the precise nature of their enslavement also changes according to the mare.
In other words, whoever knocks up Pinkie might not stay as happy (or sane) as we first thought...
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That's certainly a possibility! It'd fit perfectly with Discord's sadistic nature, that's for sure.
1658219 are you aware of the Fanfic Familiar Embrace by Ink Stroke? I'm sure that it'll fill your need for Twispike
1667451already reading it anyway Hopefully twi wins the game and gets to rape discord for impregnating her friends.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
I have a feeling that Film Reel already thinks that Discord is involved.
1668485 I hope Rainbow Dash wins because Twilight sucks giant monkey balls.
Twilight Sparkle: "It's all true!"
Anonymous Human: "Hell yeah it is, BUT WITH HUMAN BALLS! Get to sucking, you dirty whorse!"
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Engineer: Heck no!
Derpy... actually managed to win.
"Well, I'll be enslaved to love whom ever impregnates me; time to bang my husband."
That was a simple solution.
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leave it to the pony everyone would call stupid to find the best solution to this mess
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Why didn't they think of that???
.......
The solution is so obvious. Instead of worrying about being impregnated by any stallion and/or colt that can put their piece into the puzzle, Ditzy and Golden basically said "If we are going to have sex with someone and be enslaved with that pony for the rest of our lives, why not just have sex with our husbands who already love us so much?"
Wisdom and intelligence are not necessarily hand in hand: Twilight is so intelligent about trying to stop Discord that she completely misses the obvious solution. It's like trying to figure out how to climb the stairs because your leg is tired, and you just realize that the building you are in has an elevator or two. Talk about awkward.....
Also, I wonder if Ditzy's second biological foal is going to be a colt. Dinky already has an older sister, let's give her a brother!!
2803168
This was my very first thought when the rules were announced a few chapters ago.
My second thought was for her to say:
Now repeat after me. "Tell me every detail of the contest, and what you think I should do."
Shortly thereafter, she'd be involuntarily surrendering all the details of the contest, and Celestia would be swiftly contacted, and everything would get sorted out. ^_^
Discord would either be impressed by the loophole (being the lord of chaos and all) and figure out some other delightful way to torment them, or he'd be all petty and just pull out the husband's vocal chords or something.
Then I guess she isn't having this conversation with Twilight because she already did the scan on herself and is now dead.
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Not necessarily, remember that Twilight is a virgin and the mare in question isn't, meaning that the outcome could be completely different