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awesome story my friend keep it up
Hey, I think you put 'Fluttershy' as a tag instead of 'Flurry Heart.' And the Flurry Heart in that warning needs changes with the capitalizations.
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My bad
"Santa Hooves"
That’s funny, it’s not like we call our version Santa Feet.
This should have a comedy tag, all those christmas puns were cracking me up more then they probably should have lol
I almost choked on the milk I was drinking!
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Hehe sorry XD I didn't realize that would happen
one day, Flurry Heart will just realize outta the blue, that Shining was never out of the home.
awesome story. cant remember when a bit of porn made me laught that much XD
Not too shabby. Might want to do some re-reading though and get rid of some of the grammar issues here and there. Also put an anthro tag up there as well just to be safe.
that's a fun story :D
I wonder, did Flurry ever get her bike? And why does she need one? :D
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Considering that Santa Claus is a mispronounciation of Saint Nicholas, I don't think it matters that much.
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Lol she did as for why kids love bikes XD
So you know, it’s “Not a creature was stirring, not even a mouse.” The way you wrote it, it implies that everyone is awake, which would make sense if you hadn’t made the exception that Flurry Heart is awake.
The text needs editing badly. It's literally hard to read.
him
Last time I checked, Flurry isn't blonde. Also, neither 'Human', nor 'Anthro' tag is present.
I thought is should be 'It was' or, at least, 'T'was'.
throughout
The narration actually implies that everyone were sleeping except Flurry. Therefore it should be 'not a creature was awake'.
Huh?
Was she looking at the ceiling?
Another repetition.
wake
Jeez. This is messy.
Also, her hair is moving?