Agent Bon Bon is tasked with recovering a dangerous spell and a missing human. Little does she know that her best friend Lyra will try to help out as well... leading to her capture. Can Bon Bon infiltrate the sex dungeon and save the day? ...kinda?
And I'll take this reply to give people a chance to upvote or downvote my author's note as per usual with edits because I was a bit hasty when writing it. I am writing an entry for Shakes' February Incest contest, after all!
I think Roseluck got all of two paragraphs in the old version of this story and had basically no character. This time around, she’s based on my version of Roseluck and I wrote all of her lines. The first version was a bit longer and contained still more lurid details of Roseluck’s sexual appetite but Cloppy thought it took much away from Lyra’s scene. Fair enough, I suppose.
This version 2.0 was deemed acceptable to both of us and I hope you enjoy her! If for whatever reason this wasn’t enough Nymphomaniac Roseluck for you, there’s a number of stories on my account that goes into her character in depth — the best shameless clop being “Fertile Ground" and best romance fic being “A Gentleman’s Price”.
Shameless plugging aside, this is a huge, huge chapter for Luna. I gotta admit, I didn’t care much for her at first but she grew on me in a big way. Nice job on Best Princess, Cloppy!
Lyra's so clueless and horrible as a secret agent. *facehoof* I would just love to grab her and shout into her ear "If something is a secret that means you aren't supposed to say anything about it, let alone yell about it" Great story. Though Lyra makes me cringe with the whole deputy secret agent thing, but just because of her naiveté.
A big thanks again to AJA for the help on this chapter, as well as his author's note!
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You're most welcome!
And I'll take this reply to give people a chance to upvote or downvote my author's note as per usual with edits because I was a bit hasty when writing it. I am writing an entry for Shakes' February Incest contest, after all!
And now the whole world knows
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Hey now, might not be the whole world...
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Oh my bad I don’t think Lyra knows
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Not the whole world yet
If I had a nickel for every story with Bon Bon being scared of a males anatomy I'd have two nickels.
Which isn't a lot but it's weird it's happened twice.
It's a chapter.
welp thats two criminals that overheard lyra’s madness. How utterly inconvenient
Lyra's so clueless and horrible as a secret agent. *facehoof*
I would just love to grab her and shout into her ear "If something is a secret that means you aren't supposed to say anything about it, let alone yell about it"
Great story. Though Lyra makes me cringe with the whole deputy secret agent thing, but just because of her naiveté.
oh my gosh this story is just so much fun!
The problem is, certain ponies don't know Lyra and her quirks.
This is a rewrite? Thought it felt familiar...