I used to write. Depression killed that for years. I might get back to it someday.
A genetically altered superhuman soldier is transported to Equestria to kill everypony. He is extremely violent and unstable, but he doesn't want to kill. Especially since he has come to love the ponies. However, a mission is a mission. He cannot disobey orders, or he will be exterminated, and they will send another. But what if, instead of being its destroyer, he became Equestria's protector?
Just what if? Also, probable romance!
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... will read later. Interesting concept.
Great potential. NUMBER 13, you WILL succumb to the cuteness of the ponies! OR ELSE!!!!
I could go for a story like this. Granted, though that it will stay in second person, I'd keep reading. Great work so far.
Nice! I don't think i saw any grammar errors and this is shaping up nicely. Keep going.
There is already another story with this picture.
This is genius. You may want the chapter to be longer, IMO, but the concept is great and the writing so far is nearly eqd-level.
Speaking of, I would be honored if you would consider taking an editor and putting me in consideration.
Thoughts?
-CD
This is the second fic I've seen with that pic, and I gotta ask; where'd you find it? I just wanna know whether it's a Fallout pic or a Gone with the Blastwave pic (or something else, I guess, but those two seem most likely to me).
Seems interesting....
I shall read more
Promising.
1244903 Found on Google Images..... I'm old school like that.
1244871 I use multiple helpers with all of my stories. I usually ask a reader whose comment has caught my eye. I will consider you.
1244781 Problem?
Deal with it.
1244467 Thanks Kishin!
HEY GUYS! SHOULD I START THE NEXT CHAPTER? OR MAKE THE NEXT PART A PART OF THIS ONE? IT'S UP TO YOU! ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE MUTHAFUKA!
WATCHU TALKIN BOUT
1247780 I want to know if I should start the next chapter or continue with this one.
1247631 I never said I had a problem with it. I just believe that you should try not to use the same picture as other stories. Originality and all that.
1247699 Continue this chapter. It is more appealing to have long chapters than a lot which are short.
1248105 SHEEP
1248105 There! I changed it! Happy?!
1248361 I never asked you to change it. I was just commenting.
silver both you should continue the chapter then make a new one.I also think you should add the fire spirit in there somewhere.PM me for who he is.
1250520 Wat.
silver he's a guy i made up again send me a message for who he is
1253730 Ugh. another one of those who wants their character in other people's fics.
1256827>>1254692 Hey, hey, CaptainDow. This guy wants to be in my story, and i actually have the perfect idea of where to use him. I view it as help, not a hindering. I actually needed a name for a character, and this is perfect. Experiment 27, aka The Fire Spirit, sent to Equestria when the Masters learn that Ex. 13 has betrayed them. Just needed a name, and now, I've got one.
>With that Pic.
idiots doesn't even know that is a STALKER related pic :U
1258166 Kay?
What's that mean?
1258098 my judgementalness was misplaced. Sorry about that. I've had some bad experiences with readers trying to force their ideas on me.
1260139 it's alright. Just as long as i get to do a few things on my own and have a little control over what this character does. Ooh! Idea!
he was the closest thing Shadow had to a friend, face-off between the two, big dramatic battle scene. Or somethin' like that.
yeah that sounds epic so i will sing a random song not related to it
Im listening to epic song right now another good name would be elric just saying
Oh and if fire spirit kills anyone i guess it can be dark past
but in the end he helps equestria as i said in your message make sure he is on fire if you choose name fire spirit(im being so picky cause he's my character)
1271298 Yeah.... How about this? *runs away quickly* Sorry! I'll give u help with another story, but this character won't fit in this one. I've given it a lot of thought, and it just won't work with the sequel I have planned.... If you start to bash me, then you're not a true brony, and I will report you. (just fair warning)
1277019 k i understand if u make a sequel ill give you ideas(for this one 2
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