I like to write and review (react) and sometimes react to reactions
After the Gabby Gums incident rarity in a fit of rage hurts her sister Sweetie Belle’s feelings.
Sweetie Belle then runs away from home to find a new life.
Meanwhile Rarity search’s for Sweetie with her friends to tell her she didn’t mean it and she will always love her.
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This feels more like an idea that needs to be fleshed out.
It feels quickly thrown together with almost no consideration in terms of character building and the dialogue feels weak.
I would probably like this more if it had been written better
Sorry for the harsh comment by the way
Same comment as before
It feels like this needs to be more fleshed out.
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I respect your opinion and agree I’m just figuring it out unlike my other story where the commenters didn’t figure out the metaphor I made in the story. but I’m not even upset about that.
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Oh alright-
Good luck with the story, im still interested!
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I’m gonna update Tuesday sorry for the wait
Don't worry, take your time, good luck!!!
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Fixed!
Well, im ready for whatever comes next I suppose
Your reference to Avatar was right on the spot.