1 month after the fall formal Sunset Shimmer is now “friends” with the girls who defeated her.
And even though all of the girls have accepted her as a person she thinks their only her friend because of Twilight asking them. So she plans to kill herself...... what will happen when her plan begin to fall apart?
(Another cliche Sunset Shimmer redemption story that’s been done before..... but I wanted to try it for myself)
Dark Sunset is Sunset’s darker and more sinister villain side while Soft Sunset is Sunset’s newfound loving and emotional dare I say fluttershyish side.
I want to say that they aren’t multiple personalities rather different aspects of Sunset’s personality and her deep thought process is using these characters to work through her more complicated problems.
Look i get what Luna is doing, but COME ON!!!!
She can't have the student who attacked Sunset arrested for attempted assault?
Or suspended?
Don’t worry, rainbow dash. The princesses and their counterparts aren’t known for their logic.
Consequences? What consequences could come from going bowling?
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Interesting.
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Actually, that might not be such a good idea.
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That'd depend on where CHS is. After all, a lot of schools have a zero tolerance policy so all 3 of the students involved would be suspended pending expulsion. Self defense or aiding someone else is not a defense.
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Luna is being kinda stupid but also pretty smart because all of the other students would realize Sunset and Rainbow dash are not in trouble and would pick on them even more.
And don’t worry Luna also has a plan for now to “punish” him
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Luna and Celestia are known for making dumbass calls.
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Thank god. I’m glad I’m not the only one that’s noticed.
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Well she better, and make him a example, while i understand why everyone hold grudges, attacking someone who even refuses to defend themselves is wrong.
Though I really hate these fics where Sunset just becomes a door mat or punching bag and lets everyone hurt her out fo guilt or so.
She could at least taser or mace them, and it can happen outside of school as well.
Mm hm... keep going, keep going...🤔
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I literally pictured that and laughed.
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That’s kinda the point of my story it’s Sunset realizing she doesn’t deserve all of the things that are done to her and that she can be happy again.
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Wait, she doesn’t? My bad. I thought the point was although she deserved it she can bounce back.
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Glad to see you’re here, too.
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You too, 20 questions
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Okay good point 😅
You are correct.
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Is that a new nickname?
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Oh good. Got a little confused for a second.
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yeah
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Cool. Although, would 20 statements be more accurate?
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Nah, you ask more questions than anything else
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Really? I always thought they were mostly statements or jokes.
Very interesting story so far I look forward to seeing where it goes.
Not bad so far😏 Can't wait to see what happens next 😘
Is she having a debate with herself?
Is this a reference to one of the mlp episodes?
Would you rather have someone look at you with disappointment or hate?
Depends on the author.
That’s because most of them can’t stand up for themselves.
I’ll be honest, I had that thought for a while.
Wait what?
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Thanks for your thoughts
1: yes.
2: it is indeed a reference to the royal sister episode in season 9
3: she can handle hate she understands hate but disappointment hurts Sunset more
4: we’ll she were I fall on that scale
5: true
6: when I first watched Rainbow Rocks that’s what I thought
7: therapy joke
Gosh darn it another cliff😭 and its one I willingly jump into🤣
Thank you for another awesome chapter😘
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You’re welcome.
7. I’m so glad I’m not the only one that thought that.
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Glad you enjoyed and I apologize the cliffhangers are gonna be fairly frequent.
And I’m glad someone enjoyed it even though it took awhile.
Actually, that’s not a bad idea. I actually would have never thought about that.
Ok, that’s kinda f*cked up. I kinda felt sorry for her a little bit at first, but now I don’t know.
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My original version of the story had him leaking secrets to protect himself from bully’s but I changed it and I thought that would be a good reference that only I’d understand.
Yeah! It is but she’s about to die so why would she care about the people who have been mistreating her for weeks.
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Nice reference.
Aren’t they mistreating her because she f*cked with them. That’s like playing with a rattlesnake and getting angry when the snake bites.
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Human nature even if it’s deserved you might still hold something over someone who mistreated you or got revenge on you.
Also good rattlesnake analogy…..
….I might just steal that for the story.
(P.S. sorry not trying to argue)
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I guess that makes sense.
Thanks, but I feel like I probably could have come up with something better.
Go right ahead. It’s not like I’m gonna put it to good use or anything.
(P.S. it’s all good)
That should be "there"
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Thanks for pointing it out.
Fixed!
Didn't this story used to have more chapters?
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Nope!
Only 3 chapters and counting
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Only three?
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So far
Thanks for the chapter but where is the next part stupid cliff 😫 but i keep willing jumping down into it🤣
If you need a reference to Runt’s smile look up Sai from Naruto and his fake smile’s that’s where I got my reference point.
Good story so far. I noticed a few typos. I'll point out the ones that stood out to me.
I know it's a lot easier and quicker to type out, but don't use an ampersand(&), spell out and.
Capitalization needed at the beginning of each sentence and commas needed before the quotes.
No apostrophe in dears.
there's
Comma needed after the quote.
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Thanks. I appreciate people who point out the typos rather then saying you’re bad at spelling and or grammar.
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No problem. It happens to me too. I appreciate it when folks point out my typos and other things so I can do better.
Are they literally saying what happened in front of someone?
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Nice reference
Andddd wait That's IT!? NOOOO MORE PLEASE THAT CLIFF😭
This is going to be me in two months.
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Hope that’s a joke if not please reconsider you’re choice.