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I have never actually seen this pairing. Nice fic
Sorry, I took so long to get around to this. I spent all of yesterday getting Permissive Passion ready to go. I probably spent as much time editing it as I did writing the rough draft! This isn't foalcon obviously (what, no death wish?) but there's still a cute story in here regardless.
Good ol' Zebra rhyming. I might have added a towel set on a rack left for guests to throw over their backs since she's been out in the rain. You might not have thought of this but four-legged creatures get screwed over bad when it comes to the weather; their bodies down come straight down from their heads like ours do.
You made a great case for Zecora. Well done! Like the word "shamare" there, too. Very cute equinization.
The kirin especially do. Ba-dum-tss!
Aww, that's a shame. I was hoping for a bit of banter before she hoped in. Maybe I'm being impatient and we get a few lines in there later, but I'm wondering what their established relationship is. Are they friends with benefits? FIllyfriends? I loved AB's little story, very late-season MLP. But Zecora had nothing to say about it.
This is a nitpick but how deep? Up to her neck? Her shoulders? Her plot?
Rather dark imagery for a story of this nature. The metaphor of something unwanted washing away is pretty cliche, I guess, but it fits with the establishing paragraph being set in a rainstorm and her body being covered with mud and fits the tone a lot better.
"Smooches". Smooches with the dames!
The word 'curt' is usually used to describe a brief action used in the context of being rude. There's a more general alternate definition that focuses on the briefness of the action but as far as synonyms for 'quick' go, there are many better options. Kind of a forced rhyme too... You know, I'm being very ungrateful, I'm sorry. I basically tear apart every fic I touch. Old habits die hard.
Wow! I guess Apple Bloom is cursed with shortness for life.
You know what I love about clop writers? Everyone had that tool in their kit I've never seen before. Loofa's are a good idea.
Nice!
Ahh, so they are fillyfriends.
Ahh, the c-word. I never cared for it much. It's really popular though.
Is this their first time? Otherwise, as AB's fillyfriend, she'd know this already. It just feels like I'm missing important details.
Short and sweet. The descriptions of the sex itself were nice. I appreciate you floofing the story for me.
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I'm extremely glad you enjoyed this! I'm sorry it was late, life tends to get in the way, but I did have a blast doing this!
this is such an underappreciated ship, so its always great to see any content for it. and especially when its well-written, CRAZY HOT story like this!!! i love the details like zecora's black pussy, and i give u full kudos for keeping zecora rhyming; a lot of authors don't try to and i know its an extra effort but it really pays off with the authenticity and its fun to read. this was great and i only hope that u will explore this pairing more in the future because this was so great its hard not to want more!
Nice read. Juicy end~♤
Nice work on Zecora's rhyming, wish was a bit longer, history of being together and such.