Pinkie has set up her baby twin sister Marble with a new boyfriend. Things are going great, until the new boyfriend learns of Marble's past.
CW: ||Transphobia|| ||Mentions of rape|| ||Graphic content||
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22nd century Man
Fan fiction author, I am also imaginativeman69 on Archive of our own, I like to write shit, I will post any MLP related stuff here. My name is a King Crimson ref.
22nd century Man
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#2227180 - safe, artist:brother-tico, character:limestone pie, character:marble pie, character:maud pie, character:pinkie pie, my little pony:equestria girls, breasts, busty limestone pie, busty marble pie, busty maud pie, busty pinkie pie, clothing, colored pupils, equestria girls-ified, female, geode of sugar bombs, happy, humanized, magical geodes, midriff, pie sisters, siblings, simple background, sisters, smiling, white background - Manebooru
One, didn't know Pinkie was either german, Amish, or both, so that's a neat thing to learn.
Two, Rip and tear Tran a new hole, Pinkie.
Rip. And. Tear.
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it's somewhat implied or joked about how the Pie family is Amish in the series, so I decided to make them Amish in this series. As for the German, that is something they learned as they live in the German half of town, and since in this story the Pie's tend to have an easy time with languages, it is cinch for them. As for the family being in Germany, that will be explained in the main story later down the line.
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Oh okay, thanks for the explanation, lovely story btw.
OH MY GOD!!!!! This story was freaking epic. I freaking love it
FIGHT FOR TRANS AND GAY RIGHTS
I’m sad that Limestone wasn't there during all this. I know it makes sense for her not to be story wise, because she would of most definitely (probably) murdered tran.
But one could wonder how things would gone if she was there, hell, I would settle to see her reaction after girls tell her and their parents what happened.
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This will happen in the main story.
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I don't know how this was propaganda. Over top? perhaps, but this is fiction. Ridiculous? Harming bigots is a good thing.
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No prob, and thanks.
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Nice to see my comment get deleted. I didn't even say any insults or break the TOS. I see any form of criticism or dissent is not allowed.
The story is not believable at all. First off, the part where Tran is alleged to have attacked a previous queer person (or whatever the correct term for LGBTQ person is) is ludicrous. It was stated that the attack happened in a progressive city but nothing was done about it? In this day and age, attacks like that would be taken very seriously and a prosecutor would jump on that like a fat kid on a cupcake. It would be prosecuted as a hate crime since the motivation of attack was for the victims identity.
Secondly, modern Germans don't have this viking-esque form of honor. I would know, I've been there and met quite a couple of them. Germany today is a very post nationalist nation that's overly guilty of ww2, despite those who perpetrated that event, to include the murderers of the holocaust, have long since passed. Very out of place.
Then there's part of justifying organizing an attack of Tran. Why in the hell not report him to the police? In many cases today, a victim need not be the one to press charges, attacks like these can be prosecuted by the police alone. The injuries on Marble were serious enough to put him in prison for a long time.
Instead, Pinkie Pie organizes a planned fight and nearly kills him. "Huzzah!", you might say, but what good would that do Marble if her sister goes to prison? She'll be scarred even more and psychologically damaged that her simply wanting to find love resulted in sister going to prison.
And no school officials in their right mind would ever let Pinkie Pie go off the hook. Police would be called immediately, as the safety of students is their #1 job aside from educating them.
This COULD have been a better executed story, but instead it came off as a personal anger manuscript justifying violence against your enemies, except the target is a current popular one, bigots. The previous one was homosexuals. Who knows what the next popular victims will be.
But I don't expect anything other than a comment deletion and more "This is justified because of x y z". Just wondering if you deleted it or if you complained to a mod. Oh well, result is the same.
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First. I deleted your comment since it had contained no form of formal criticism (saying something is over the top, ridiculous, and propaganda is not criticism, it’s just piss flying through the wind) and I saw it as a possible transphobe shitting on it cause a bigot got beaten up
2. Your first critique is somewhat valid, but mind you most violence of trans people are (in amercia at least) rarely reported on the news, the sexual violence we face, the death threats we get, even in a progressive city there is a chance of it being ignored. I could’ve put in “the family didn’t want to press charges” instead of his family leaving, but hey, live and learn.
3. No shit Germans don’t have that concept of Viking honor, the fact you think I thought shows you have preconceived notions of me without even asking. (I have German blood too mind you) I used it for dramatic effect, to give the family more backstory, it’s plan I have on expanding this lore. So, this critique can be discarded.
4. Ever heard of Django or inglorious bastards? This is a story to help those that have faced violence or get shit on for being trans to have this outlet in seeing a Bigot getting the shit beat out of him. Idc about the morals of being the bigger person or whatever, we deserve to have our anger expressed in anyway we see pleased.
5.it wasn’t reported because it was implied that marble was done with him, she wanted no further contact with him and just wanted it to be done. And guess what, not all police take the reports of trans people seriously, welcome to reality where not everything will work out the same
7. If you don’t like the violence that’s fine, but coming from my life and view point, harming someone that wants you dead is a good thing, it’s called being defensive. I’m a firm believer in peoples Justice, and that not amount of moralizing from you can change my mind from that. You may live in a world where everything is handled “civilly” but in the real world, stuff is much more grey, and sadly people end up getting hurt. I don’t want it to be that way, but that’s life.
8. And I don’t expect anything from you other than “it’s not morally right cause x y z” fuck off, this whole critique you have forwarded reads like a person who has never been on the bad end of being harmed by people for their intinate being. You sound like that type of person that would push the “northern aggression” line tbh. Or that our people were uppity during the civil rights era when we fought for social equality. Fuck off, lmao.
9. I’ll keep your comment tho, but I will block you. People like you are the reason why nothing gets done, you sound like a liberal that Malcom X, and MLK warned about.
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I’m going to rework my response tomorrow because it was childish and more anger field, and give a more proper response that isn’t emotionally filled
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Only thing I can say for folks like yourself son is to open a bible and stop listening to media propaganda.
Your life will turn for the better for it, trust me.
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Uhh, thank you? I practice Ifa, and read texts of the dharma where we are encouraged of being ourselves and open to whom we are and what fits our destiny, not to say I don't read the bible, I do, but I don't feel the spiritual connection to it (excluding with Yeshua whom i see as an avatar of Obatala) as for the media aspect, I can say for the same to you, because the media is a double edged sword mind you. I base my beliefs from what I have learned from knowing these people, what the social and hard scientists have said, and so on. I appreciate the concern, but i'm fine. also, that's a sick broly pfp.
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actually, if you want, we can talk rn in dms, I'm open to it. Talks on spirituality fascinate me
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I mean....not adverse to it. Just saying it's better to let go and move on than hang onto hate, even if it's a little.
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Oh, I have been delving into the Buddhist tantric view of hate, it is indeed an emotion that can cause suffering to oneself. my philosophy is this, delve into the negative emotions to have a better understanding of them and how to transform them into their opposite. I do think there can be righteous indignation and when I originally wrote the message earlier this year, I was getting ready for class and felt frustrated. I wish to not harm people, but I think if one wishes to harm you must defend yourself. Perhaps hate is something I need to struggle with, as I wish not to harm others, as I do think people can change for the better, I just wanted to write this story because I dreamt of it. I don't regret writing this, and I still think that it is ok to protect oneself from those that seek to harm you; the revenge honor thing was just something I wanted to work with as writing fanfiction is nothing more than just practice for me so I can eventually move on to writing independent stories.
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It's not a wrong phrase but I'm with the one God not any of the pantheons. Kind of don't want to go from there cause I don't want to trample on what anyone may believe here but yeah.
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No no, its's fine, like I said I am open to discussion (if you want this to private, we can dm) but you did nothing to offend. You're fine, and have been quite nice.
This story is freaking AWESOME! GO, PINKIE, GIVE THOSE 'PHOBES A HELL OF A PUNISHMENT!!