This story is a sequel to Queen Chrysalis Tricks Nightmare Moon
Chrysalis and the bulk of her army is invading Canterlot on its Royal Wedding day.
Only issue is that her army may be way too small.
Like not small in numbers... Just... Small.
(My first crackfic, don’t kill me)
Now with audio thanks to StraightToTheStudio - https://youtu.be/gOgfv6h7kT8
Featured back in 14/2/2022
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Ha, cute!
iamsinner here
banger story
good shitpost
the king of shitposts is commanding all to read this story
*chef's kiss* Amazing!
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King? Don't sell yourself short
SiNnEr sent me. Glad he did. I couldn't stop laughing. Nicely done mate.
A better plan than in the actual episode, and more successful.
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Glad I could make you laugh haha!
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Thank you very much!
Came over here at Sinner's request. Funny, but... dear lord do you need an editor.
Literally this
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already told him, he said he'll work on it after work
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You're welcome!
Unexpected.
Omg, this was perfect
her?
Howdy hi!
This was a silly time. I'm not sure if the tiny Changelings or the general ridiculousness of the ponies were more enjoyable, probably 'yes'. Anyways, this was fun, had a good time, hope to see more from you.
Thanks for the read!
Thank god they did not get to the cake Nothing worse then have bugs in your food, 10 out of 10 will use bug spray
Somehwere in G5 a pincess's ear twtiches
Well this was an unexpected but welcome story.
I think you might mean "vile"? Although with "unfathomable imagination" following it up, maybe this version of Chrysalis is just rather... loose with her usage of language?
This was a hilarious story I think even the Breezies could take on the Changelings if they are this small.
Great Job.
Arguably more successful than the actual invasion.
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Yup I did! Thank you for spotting that mistake I made
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Ah thanks for spotting that, my bad
Gotta give the changelings credit: they'll take on even (to them) giant ponies to have their fill of love.
Great crackfic. it had me laughing
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Autocorrect, I'm guessing.
This is just too friggin' good! Never really thought about changelings being that small until this story came up, but oh man it is such a pleasure! Hope ya didn't mind, but I couldn't say no to making a reading of this smol fic of yours!
Audio Linky!: https://youtu.be/gOgfv6h7kT8
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Oh mai that’s wonderful xD
Changelings? More like pocket changelings, amiright.
Yes, I came back to this story to make a dumb pun. I make no excuses.
Horrible disgusting pony bugs! YOU GO SQUISH NOW!!
Loved it you get a Fav. Thanks for writing these story.
Wait, Pipp Petals has changeling ancestry?
Well, could be worse, Chrissie - can't help but remember a similar incident where... well...
Considering their size a single pony (or a small group) would be enough to do the job.
And they probably won't even have to force anyone.
LOL, big fail!
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The only aspect I'd like to point out is the random switch of temporal reference from present tense and past tense in narration. Stories usually stick to a constant tense in order not confuse the reader about when things happen (exceptions are possible, but preferably in such a way that it conveys some sort of new idea/information/event — like a 3rd person narrator switching from past tense to present tense at the end of the story in order to admit, in 1st person even, they lived through the story they've just told you)
If you wish to self-review your works for mistakes or improvements that can be made, I can't recommend anything more than Fimfiction's Writing Guide. It tackles every important aspect of writing in my opinion, from grammar to writing styles.
Anywho. Keep up the good work. 👍
Ha, THIS one. I remember it fondly.
Funa
Wonderful small story. More would be great like maybe twilight puts them inside an ant farm.