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KingdaKa


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Awesome

I haven't started reading yet, but sweet.

Edit:

The three of them had wondered through alleyway and darkened corner to reach their destination, guided unwillingly to the destination that was a place they so intently avoided. The world had changed for them once; a land of battle and magic beneath their feet, then thrust out and into the spiral, away from all they had ever known and into a land more primitive and cruel. But this second defeat? To call it humiliation would be too gentle.

I only just started and I found these errors.

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Dammit, wander and wonder switch themselves, I swear.

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You also missed the in front of alleyway and corners.

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I didn't. Intentional.

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Okay now that you mention it I see that.

Okay, I've just finished it, and while I am disappointed that there was so little detail in the sexytimes, this cries out for a sequel where CHS gets convinced that Sci-Twi is some kind of sex goddess that they all want a piece of while the Dazzlings try and keep her to themselves.

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Who made the cover art?

Very very funny, and definitely begging for a sequel. :D

That certainly escalated quickly, but a good short story

“Why didn’t they want me? ”

Ooh, Sunset's jealous!:pinkiehappy: I guess the Dazzlings wanted cute and nerdy over sexy.

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I'm not sure, but it might have been Rainbow who said that, I can't really tell.

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In fairness, I had maybe two days to write the whole thing. Couldn't add anything steamy without it feeling like an afterthought. It was just supposed to be utter lunacy.
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TZC is who you're looking for.
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Mercy. I've got more stories waiting to be written than ones published at this point.

Did you seriously cut it short like that?

Seriously?

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Alright, I see the mistake I made. I thought Sunset was stuttering out of jealousy, but on second look, it was because she was just shocked that the Dazzlings just made off with one of her friends.:rainbowlaugh:

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To be fair to Rainbow, according to movies, books, games, and the internet, nerds don't get supermodels, let alone three of them at the same time, especially if they're gay. An egomaniacal athlete like Rainbow would sooner believe the three crazy sexy sea witches would sooner pick her than Sci Twi.

Sooo... chapter 2?

Great story. I'd love a sequel where Sci-Twi is actually dating the sirens and how they slowly corrupt her without either party knowing. Then as the corruption grows Sc-Twi starts acting different towards everyone and even her study habits diminish and because she is still new to magic she unwittingly powers up the Sirens and when they realize it Adagio tells the other 2 to help her keep corrupting Sc-Twi til she turns into a Siren herself and then get revenge on the other six after Sc-Twi turns into their fourth Siren

must have sequel

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In time. The world is a mess and is my problem.

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cool i will be patient :)
thank u for always writing such good f/f stories

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Who made the cover art?

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