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Postmodern


Tell me I'm wrong, baby.

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So regarding the water sports tag, we’re not talking very much, right? (I ask cus I’m not a fan and if there’s a lot of that this story probably isn’t for me, but I’ve really liked the previous stories so I’m not about to just ignore this.)

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There's honestly a good bit, I'm afraid. But it does tie into the story, if that matters.

you are heaven

mid-chapter comment: i cannot sort out what 'the plan' is at all but it's hot as fuck. god— Celestia-damn it, I want them to grind her worthless soul into dust. Leave her a bliss Princesscock thrall, much happier and more useful than trying to recover what was left of her old self. fuck. please. please please.

i doubt that will happen and i'll probably not be disappointed anyway. but please.

—jesus fucking christ i love you. i need you. the piss!!! the raw energy and sex and fuck you're great. Thank you. let me thank you.

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Glad you're enjoying it. These characters really are a blast to write. Celestia's duality is especially fun.

Nicely done! I'm looking forward to how you deal with Twilight. Since she's very magically powerful, according to the laws of the story she's probably also quite depraved in her own right: did she run from Celestia because she thought Celestia was dangerous, or because she used the poison joke intentionally on Celestia and had some dark fantasies or hidden ambitions...

And now that she's an alicorn, will she be even more horny than when she did that?
And will she be adorkably in denial about what she wants, unintentionally denying herself and making herself even more magically powerful, to the point that they were able to detect her magic signature?

Or maybe she's so subby that when she couldn't get Celestia to dom her, she just went to Cadance...

...Or will it be something even better? I have no doubt.

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Cute. You might like my fic too then :3

I'm really uncertain what to say about this one. It's smut for a good cause. It's purpose with questionable applicability. It's fetish with poignant mental help. It's... Gah!

I came for the smut, but I left with a confused appreciation for the show, and the almost comical action that resulted in such welcome, heartfelt results.

Whatever you're doing, Postmodern, it's definitely not wrong.

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Thanks! I'd say "not wrong" is one of the nicest things anyone can say about someone's writing.

Now I'm wondering if Celestia will continue what she started with Twilight or still learn to control her "desires" normally, because the risk of losing one of the six is still exist .
I honestly get the feeling that Tia hasn't learned anything and is still thinking with her "baton".
waiting for the new part.

Your writing is almost too good. I keep stopping in the sex scenes, imagining Celestia bending me over and doing whatever it is you've written, almost forgetting the story exists. Really excellent stuff. You show things so well and are really able to pull the reader into what you write.

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Thank you! Look forward to the next one.

Very nice. I look forward to how you handle Twilight's personality presentation. 😃

Mary... do what you need to do. Don't fuck this up!!!

I really appreciate the very unique flair to this series. I love stories that bring new character roles and terminology to the pony world. The distinction that Luna is the Night Regent, not "the princess", is a particularly cool one!

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