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You don't need to tell me twice what stuck means ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
yall know how i can pour bleach into my eyes without getting blind???? i have no idea what the fucc i did just read but im curious for the next chapter(s)
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Oh, that might've gone over my head while I was reconstructing the perspectives. Thanks for the tip, I should've done a more through job. I'll clean this up before releasing the rest.
its a nice story :)
im hoping for a proper anal scene or rimming in future...
The fact that people will see a story (such as this one) they don't like, click on it, and then proceed to take time out of their day to downvote all the comments, multiple people in this case, when it could have gone completely ignored by the people in question.
I don't understand it? Like, why would you actively pay attention to something you don't like, complain about it, rather than flat-out ignore it? Nobody has got anything to gain?
Great work
sparing
they were
as if
Hm I hope that he gets his comeuppance...
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Oh, thank you, thank you!
Agh, I need that tense consistency! I was enjoying the fic, though.
still working on the filly POV?
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Yes, yes. I can't tell when it'll done though, I'm trying to finish the entire fic before publishing it.
this was a decent story
not the greatest but oh well im not one for foreplay though this was good
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Exquisite this was
Yikes! Great story!
I don't like this, it's dark and scary and it gives me feels, and not the good kind either, but still, i can't seem to be able to stop reading it. Its like a burning school bus full of nuns... its horible but i just cant look away.
No, they wouldn't know the signs. Wonder if the hospital staff might pick them up?
This is not the same kinda story as the fist chapter
a better one for sure but much darker.
She’s keep heading back to the park every day find that Mr. So she can continue her lessons
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I wanted the filly's pov of the event.
It also happens that she didn't take it very well.
So this is the other side... then ending is a bit confusing, but it it's good. I would like to kindly ask for this to be a series of sorts, (yes I read the note, I just think it should be a series. It's rare for a tag called "stuck" actually being any sense of the word)
Heh, continuity!
Well, at least there's some amount of justice.
nice
good ending
It's nice to see someone actually deal with the aftermath and victim's trauma, from the outset this looked like (and I guess for chapter 1 was) just a rape fetish fic.
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when she
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Thanks a lot!
Nice ending, I wasn't expecting such a serious take on the subject. This seemed like just a simple fetish fic at first.
How awful that she would make up pornography to plant in her father's house! Good thing he already dealt with her, huh? That's why it's good to make sure she never forgets him and maybe one day, pay a little visit to her daughter or son and have them join in taking a trip down memory tunnel~
This got better and better as I read.
I had a friend once that told me how she was raped back in our teens. Said certain positions remind her of it and that she'll start crying if the trauma kicks in. I didn't expect to see that here. I really didn't expect the second chapter even though I knew it was there. I am pleasantly surprised. That first stallion is a menace to society and I'm glad to hear he suffered some consequence.
I felt a little sad on the first chapter. Sure, 'ahm stuck step bro.' vibes at first but then it lapsed into being what it was. Rape.
Seeing things from the Filly's perspective helped to lighten some of this but as things got darker and more real it added weight and investment in the real mc.
All 'n all, good read. Much respect for respecting Miss MC.
I don’t understand how they were able to identify her attacker or why they were looking through the faxes in the first place .
also, what specifically did they do to get him in trouble