This story is a sequel to Topper’s Pizza
(Not necessary to read Topper’s Pizza before this one. The first chapter of this story is a copy-paste of that one.)
Knead Top is the lone owner of his pizza parlor, Topper’s Pizza. It was originally his parents’ pizza place, but they gave it to him.
…in their will.
One night, Princess Luna visits this pizza shop. They enjoy a pizza. Then, the next week, she comes back. And then again. And then again…?
They end up friends. One of them wants it to be something more.
But first, Topple needs to learn to let go.
(Cover art by slushpony! His work is great!)
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Chapters (8)
And that is why Luna is best princess in my opinion since she isn’t afraid to fight unlike her sister
General Luna, you are a bold one
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facts brother. so true my friend
Hey just like modern day restaurants
Uuuh Luna I think you also forgot the word tryanny in there too
Please tell me he will live in the castle or at least give it a home in ponyville because at least they like pizza and besides pizza is very good also nobles who says otherwise can suck it
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I am not one to give out spoilers ;)
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Hey it’s true if words don’t get them to stop then buckshot will or a .45 round will
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Also I see what you did their in hello there.
A fellow Star Wars fan
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I do find myself enjoying the occasional Star Wars movie
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Who doesn’t
I love this sweet story, I want to see where it goes.
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:)!
Ah yes, carrot cakes. Truly underrated meal
Meh. Doesn't sound very--
--... okay, geez, fine, I'll read it, twist my arm why don't you.
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always gotta have a good hook vro
I love me a good slice of life story, especially ones that have Pizza + Luna! Keep it up, I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.
dis is guuuud! lulu and the pitzzer booooi luv it! need MOARS! :3
This is a really good story! Can't wait for the next one! :D
Why is the first chapter the same as the original story?
Duuude why is the first chapter the same as the previous story? Thats just lazy.
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…so people don’t have to go read an entirely different story in order to get the context…
It just saves time for the readers.. it just makes things more convenient, is all. It wasn’t done out of laziness.
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To quote what I said to the other guy:
…so people don’t have to go read an entirely different story in order to get the context…
It just saves time for the readers.. it just makes things more convenient, is all. It wasn’t done out of laziness.
Kinda surprised she hasn't visited him in his dreams yet. Anyway I'm looking forward to where this goes!
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Just be careful doing that in the future. I read the first story before reading the second story expecting two chapters, but got one instead. Personally, maybe mark it in some way to let people know it’s the same?
Ultimately it’s your call, but it left me ( perhaps others as well) feeling like I got tricked.
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I did mark it. Look at the story description, I put it in parentheses. This isn’t a new addition, either, that’s always been there. I’ll make it easier to see tho
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You’ll see why not in the future ;)
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Then I missed it the first time, but that should end a lot of confusion. What threw me off was the chapters were two different names as well, but it’s don’t matter anymore.
Do you have a schedule for the story?
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That’s fair. Wanted to have a gimmick with the chapter titles, to clear confusion with that
And uhhh schedule, no I don’t, probably should. The next chapter is being worked on as we speak though.
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Awesome. As a fellow fanfic writer, I can definitely say don't feel rush writing to get chapters out because that is the quickest way to kill all enjoyment. If you feel the need to take a break and work on something else after the releasing the chapter then do it. I personally bounce back between three fics of mine to keep interest up with each one.
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Im actually mega hyped to be done with the outline and finally be able to work on the actual story so I’ll be working quick for a while I think
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(Not necessary to read Topper’s Pizza before this one. The first chapter of this story is a copy-paste of that one.)
It's right there on the description
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It was only added after addressing our comments. Before it wasn't as noticeable with the chapter names being different with each story.
Poor Topple he really is feeling like crap and probably while still mourning...
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If you’re talking about the red bold, that was changed in post. The message had always been there but it used to be near the bottom of the desc, and I can understand why a reader of Topper’s Pizza wouldn’t feel the need to read the desc again tbh. The confusion was inevitable
Thank you for trying to defend my honor, though
New story? Consider me intrigued
this is exquisite! myess! keep up the great work my good man!
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Thank you sir :salute:
Love it, keep up the good work.
I like an original take on things :)
Oh hood. Why that's very good. Yes, I like that!
Is the honey thing from real-world experience, or is it just something you heard once? Or did you make it up?
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My mother always does it when making homemade pizza.
Really enjoying this so far. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
It makes sense to give time to them to get to know each other instead of just being friends right off the get go...so I'm enjoying this a lot and hope to see more
I really love this!
I’m guessing that a vegetarian pizza, for a race of herbivores, would be akin to a monster pizza in our world.
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Ever try a monster cookie? I love backing those in winter. Perfect dunking treats.
It was a good chapter. Good introduction to drama.
She could just bring her sister to visit for a pizza one afternoon, and it'd be like commander shepherds favourite pizza on the citadel