All the princesses are drunk. Twilight just wanted to read. Now she's at a wedding alter with Chrysalis. What.
DISCLAIMER: Sex tag is used but there isn't really much. It's just blunt because I'm too lazy for that.
ALSO: This will be bad as it was 1AM when I was doing this and I was bored so, ya know. I have no idea what was going on in my mind when I was writing but monster helped me lmao.
well that was wild
all "three" ? ain't they 5 alicorns?
Celestia, Luna, Candence, Twilight and Flurry?
okay with Celestia and Luna stepping down there are 3 Princesses.... ?
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Oh yeah- Thank you, I'll go change it to four 😅
Honestly not bad for a bored monster trip story. Jumped around a little, but it had a point and was amusing. Honestly wouldn't mind seeing a more thought out version.
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was a funny read xD
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Thank you! I've just re written the chapter to make a 'normal' version without the sex. I read over it and though 'hey, lets make a wholesome but still comedic version'. But I may write something in the future like this, but planned and done properly of course.
Now this is quality writing, you could merge both versions actually and get a better story but... This is what you need to write, crackfics, you're good at them
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Hmmm, possibly, I may do something similar in the future and keep with comedy fanfics.
I might add this to my head cannon but I’m telling no one which version
Some grammatical errors here and there, but nothing major. The story itself was pretty cool though. I think I may have a taste for this ship.
I think this should have a "Non-consentual" tag since this pretty much first, i mean seriously, her first kiss is now gone and she lost her virginity to her enemy! Ya I would be pretty pissed.
Ok now this ending is more wholesome and less forced.