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Interesting and beautiful, MOAR!
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Thank you! (I was worried that I went too far, or that the story was too implausible (I mean....it IS a story about magical horses so...)) BUT thank you very much! I will gladly oblige when I find the time.
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Well, this story is extremely alluring, and the idea of luna having raised and trained three kids in the time she was banished to the moon is a exceptionally good plot! ,I am ecstatic for the next chapter!
Also, don't worry, from my stand point, this story makes sense and It is plausible.
Also, take your time when you are writting the next chapter!
i look forward to more
Read through this a few times and I still don't understand what the hell is even happening. It's not even poorly pace or anything but there is hardly any context to what is going on.
this last chapter I do not understand much, the timeskip seems too much, for me maybe it was better if the protagonist took advantage of the various events of the episodes to make his plans instead of disappearing for 2 years and then returning.
then I see this story it was better if instead of a story of revenge we had seen with luna facing her challenges as a mother and remedying the mistakes of the period on the moon and the three children trying to overcome the problems of being the children of Nightmare Moon, having a mother with a different personality and seeing everything they have believed and learned to be wrong / useless.
take this comment as my point of view, the story is yours and you do what you want with it, however I see good potential and I'm curious to see how it goes on.
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Ah, I feared that such may be the case. I wanted to write quite a lot more, but due to me rushing a bit to get the chapter done (since nothing was posted last week) and due to me worrying that dragging out the story makes it less interesting for readers, I cut back quite a bit. When I get back to writing, maybe I will try to rewrite the chapter (if I can find a way to not make the text too bad). But thank you for the feedback!
Sincerely,
Me
I like this its real poetic and dark. In in
This is awesome just listening to pegasus device and end of days while reading haha
I love this story, only when i see that the last chapter was released in juni... My heart breaks, a little bit, just a liiiitle bit.
She should have killed some of those unprotected fodder guards.
Good read ive always like story's like this, where the mc is the villan and are to angry/stubborn to see reason. I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter. 👍
I really like the way this story is turning out. It’s reminiscent of this story called To Know Hell and its sequel Finding Artemis.
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Thank you! I've been trying to figure out WHO exactly the main character is. (I think I'm still not too sure about that.)
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Thank you, too! I haven't heard of those two stories yet! Maybe I will check them out when I am done with my current reading material? (I maaaaay have overdone my book shopping over the last summer.)