Close to the Sunn

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Sunny Starscout being evasive? Sprout now unerringly obedient to her every ask? Izzy Moonbow being... well, Izzy?

Something weird is ahoof, and Sherrif Hitch will investigate.

Pray (for his poor little cherub-like sanity) he never finds out what it is.

This is my2nd place entry for the Quills and Sofas Speedwriting group's G5 Shipping contest. Thanks to AuroraDawn, Snow Quill and BandyBrony for reviewing/pre-reading!

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PuzzleMaster98

PuzzleMaster98 #1 · Nov 16th, 2022 · 1 · ·

I loved this!!! So good!! I want more Sprout!!

Vis-a-Viscera

Vis-a-Viscera #2 · Nov 16th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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Happy to provide it, my friend.

PuzzleMaster98

PuzzleMaster98 #3 · Nov 16th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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Yesss!! Sprout is one of my favorite characters of Gen 5 mlp

Huk

Huk #4 · Nov 16th, 2022 · · ·

Not bad, but could really us an editor

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #5 · Nov 17th, 2022 · · ·

And then Hitfch’s jaw hit the floor for real. Sunny’s did not follow suit - her lips were too busy wrapping around Sprout’s, both ponies hanging half-out of the open window. Of course, Hitch’s clearing throat sent her stumbling in shock.

Hitch
And I did not see that coming that's why sprout not only feeling guilty but also having a crush on her dang

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #6 · Nov 17th, 2022 · · ·

Well I would say this is a pretty interesting story here and I didn't see this coming either so hitch was getting a little suspicious why Sprout is been so helpful with cleaning up the lighthouse and he's been very talkative with sunny and hitch really wants to make sure that nothing will hurt sunny which that was nice of him but sometimes we just don't get too paranoid but then after he wants to talk with her he saw both sunny and Sprout hugging each other and apparently they like each other which again cute and very unexpected again this was pretty good keep up the good work

Axolotl222

Axolotl222 #7 · Nov 17th, 2022 · · ·

Now don't get me wrong, this is already a cute story. But repurposing the title of a G4 episode into the title of your fic? That's a level of Unicycling that Izzy would be proud of.

littleman001

littleman001 #8 · Nov 17th, 2022 · 1 · ·

There's a G5 Shipping Contest?! And I wasn't told? I'm a little disappointed. But my disappointment is lessenned by reading the very first SunnySprout fic! And a very cute one at that. Definitely enjoyed the HitchIzzy background vibes as well. Nice work!

While I realize the focus here was on the humor, some explanation on how they hooked up or why Sunny would want anything to do with the guy who destroyed her home would have been nice.

Flora Blossom