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bahatumay


Simultaneously able to type 94 wpm and still take five years to finish a story. If you're feeling generous, throw a ko-fi at me.

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Tempest Shadow, still wandering Equestria in search of herself, accepts Applejack’s request to deliver some Hearth’s Warming pies. Accompanied by Owlowiscious, there’s no way this can go badly.


Written for Flash Notion for Jinglemas 2022

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 5 )

“What are these, and what is in them?” she asked as she picked up another.

“Love,” Applejack answered simply.

Tempest gave her a flat look.

“And about three sticks of butter,” she amended.

Would I be right in assuming that this is a The Thinkin' Spot reference? ;)

Either way, this is an interesting duo you've been assigned, and you've done an equally interesting job of sending them off on their journey. Looking forward to reading the rest!

Especially given the foreboding "Dark" tag hanging overhead…

Huh. Was the mother of all cliffhangers the goal, or is there more coming eventually? It just seems like an odd place to end after the rest of the story.

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It is! First saw it referenced in bookplayer’s bio and it made me laugh.

I was not expecting the turn at the end there. Some great genre-shifting here, both done well.

So was that the monster or did Tempest become one of them?

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