With Twilight Sparkle's recent ascension comes not just a new pair of wings, but access to all the added perks of a pegasus pony. Rainbow Dash decides to show Twilight her favorite one of them all.
Cute little story on cloud napping that I just had to get out of my head and into words
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Glad someone finally said it. Hasbro dropped the ball on this idea methinks.
Famous last words, Twilight.
I'll say this: for a story about something as boring as sleeping this was actually a fun little read.
Great job! This was nice to read! 👍
This was pretty wholesome, I liked it!
Restless sleepers beware!
Now that Spike has wings She'll have to show him the wonders of cloud napping.
This is really cute, but I imagine when Rainbow notices the missing rectangle, she'll know what's up. Afterwards it would be funny if Rainbow then shows up at Twilight's door requesting payment to weather factory for a cloud bed.
Wonderful little piece of fluff.
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Spike may have wings now, but he doesn’t have the pegasus magic required to cloud nap.
An excellent and quite cute Slice of Life fic. There really, really isn't much of stuff like this these days. Thank you for this
Please stop those beautiful thoughts!!!
Literally if any of us gets the chance to sleep on a cloud like what twilight had embraced then i bet that we could the sleeping dreamworld as long as needed until there is no tomorrow anymore
I don't wanna imagine any of us actually being able to sleep on clouds just to end up like that a--- oh sweet celestia...it could be a perfected sleeping medicine, oh boi that could end only badly!
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... deja vu
Generally speaking no, but since you poached a raincloud... Well that might cause a bit of an issue.
This is a nice short story.
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Griffons can stand on clouds, so I wouldn't put it past dragons to be able to do the same.
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these sort of short slice of life fics have always been my favorite thing here ><
Aw thanks!
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Ahh that's from gilda's first episode right? My headcanon was that perhaps they can stand on them and all, but maybe can't manipulate them the way pegasi can for things like tornadoes, rain, lightning, or other weather events
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Didn’t we read this yesterday?
It wasn’t quite the same story though...
Déjà vu
But I must say that I thoroughly enjoyed this version !
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No, like I feel like read literally the exact same post before
This is a really good story. It makes me want a cloud bed of my own now, they sound, to quote Twilight's own review of the cloud bed "awesome".
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We did, but it was for a single chapter.
A very short, different chapter.
It finished with Twilight slicing a rectangular, bed shaped cloud from Applejack’s orchard.
Identical description though.
Did the author unpublish then republish something?
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ohh? not that I'm aware of; I made a few typo fixes here and there yesterday but I usually don't unpublish/republish for those, just silently save the changes
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Haha, it’s fine. Bizarre.
A chapter about one third the length of the first, with no actual dialogue from Rainbow. Just Twilight monologuing inside her head and then acquiring clouds from Applejack.
Pegasus Twilight is fun to read
EDIT:
Three weeks later.
A wild chapter appears!
Our déjà vu chapter has re-appeared as Chapter Two.
So we aren’t going mad after all
A perfect two-shot.
Nicely done, dear author.
I like this story 😁
The mental image of Twilight sprawled out with her face in a cloud is funny!
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The mental image reminds me of a story I heard about one of our old dogs. Some years ago they apparently decided to take a nap in the middle of one of my brother's school concerts via laying down legs (and everything else) sprawled out for everyone to see.
6-D this was a cute fluff piece (emphasis on the fluff). I now want to swap out my old spring mattress for a cloud bed.
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Sounds cute and funny!
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from what I hear they unwittingly stole the show.
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I bet. It's hard to ignore a dog or any animal doing something silly 😁
I can totally envision a sequel series all about Twilight trying to kick her cloud napping habit.
I doubt it would be written, but I can envision it.
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Especially given she put it over her mattress.
I can just see the aftermath. Twilight waking up to wet sheets and having to explain to Spike why he has to dry out her mattress.
Don't get me wrong this story is great and Rainbow Dash is mostly on point, but every time I try to imagine her softly giggling, my brain breaks.
Not that it's a bad thing.
Pfft. Of course they did.
Sounds nice.
Well it would certainly make some kind of impression.
Huh. Now that I think about it, it makes some sense that a cloud could be used to suffocate a Pegasus.
I never thought of it before, but given the way their magic seems to work, it makes some sense.
I always assumed air could pass through it, but if it really acts as a solid to them, then I guess I could see it.
Blossom?! What Are you doing here?!
Delightful bit of fluffy slice of life fun, mixed with sensuous description and in depth world building. Mmm! Perfection!
6-D Pegasus,
This story was very sweet. I enjoyed this one very much. I like seeing Twilight being able to chill for a bit. It helps me get more relaxed, myself.
Another great story, friend! Keep it up!
Such a...fluffy premise.
....
I'll see myself out now.
The image of Twilight being addicted to sleeping on a cloud is adorable to picture.
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Mmmm. Cloud.
Really makes me wish we had the same soft fluffbeds to sleep on.
Endearing. I liked it.
what a cute story
Little did she now, it wasn't only one night