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Undome Tinwe


Some of them want to use you, some of them want to be used by you/Some of them want to abuse you, some of them want to be abused.

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"And this is not your fantasy." Rarity's grin widened. "It's ours."

This time, it only felt like a normal amount of excessive exuberance.

These are both wonderful lines. They're not the only ones, of course, there's a lot to love here. What is it about jaded old Rarity that's just so good?

Anyway, very well done. It's thoughtful and cute and gets right to the point.

I didn't particularly enjoy the part about sex, but absolutely loved the episodes where Rarity was jealous of Twilight's ageless looks.Good job,it always be the best part when rarity and twilight confide to each other.

"Oh, Twilight, you are such a good student.

NOW it's exactly like Twilight's fantasy. If this story had had the comedy tag, that statement would have triggered an orgasm.

*sees title*
*sees chapter title*
~But then again, too few to mention

God damn this is a goat fic
(Greatest of all time)

Read this a while ago, just didn't comment until now. This was really good! I enjoyed Twilight and Rarity's interactions at the bar and what going in disguise meant for both of them, and it felt really natural for them to just go straight to, well, fulfilling Twilight's fantasies. You did well in incorporating their developing relationship into the sex scenes.

This is the kind of fic that immediately reminds me of Romance Reports, which some people (apparently) consider Porn and I just... can't. It's that perfect blend of knowing it's obviously going to involve sex at some point, yet it's also so much more than that, to the point where I just can't put it on my porn shelf.

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