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Arkogon


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Welcomes big Mlp Fans. Troid and Red have decided to rewrite the MLP Movie, just don't ask why, but they beginning to make the movie much better than the original movie. So be prepared, things about to be rewrite and change things around just to make the movie better and actions, and also Michael Bay as well. So enjoy the script they're rewriting.

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"Everyponies, I have a big announcement that I am ready to tell. And ready to tell, my husband Flash Sentry." Everyponies and hippogriffs were excited as Flash wanted to know. "Flash Sentry, I wanted to tell you and my friends, something that I have been wanting to tell you all. But I only wanted my husband to know first." The crowd goes quiet, as Flash comes forward to her.

"So, what is it you want to tell me now?" As he said, Twilight whispered to his ear and his eyes grew wide with a big surprising moment smile. "You mean...." He said surprisingly.

Twilight nodded, as Flash flew to the air fast cheering and laughing. Twilight's friends wanted to know what got him so excited, as Twilight tells them and her friends. "Everponies, Flash and I are having a foal!"

And Troid rolled his eyes. "Yeah, yeah, whatever. Let's just get this over with." He said, not wanting to talk. As the movie was about to begin, he spoke loudly. "Twilight's pregnant at the end!!"

Sorry, but I don't believe this ridiculousness. Basically, IF Twilight's pregnant the whole time? Then why is she even fighting or risking her and her unborn child's life in the first place!!?? I won't be surprised that Twilight tragically have a miscarriage. Because of her recklessness in the movie. :facehoof: :fluttershyouch:

Twilight shouldn't even fight in the first place if she is really pregnant the whole time!

The Lion King 1 1/2 reference? That's funny!

I love this movie! And the rewrites!

Atlantis threat? Instead it's not the Storm King? Cool!

The wizard of oz reference! Lol!

Now that's funny in the windmill part!

Rainbow Dash is awesome! But Twilight Sparkle is my favorite pony. Flash, You don't know how wrong you are.

Things are getting interesting in a hurry!

This is new. Under the sea, under the sea. One question: Who's the protector?

Oh no! Twilight has been caught!

Literally a plan... Now to save Twilight and canterlot. Fist Bump style!

The heroes has upper hoof, but the battle is not over. The final battle is almost here.

Come.on, Give Rainbow Dash credit, just like she said, this is far from over. The final battle awaits!

They got to do something before it's too late.

Still doing The Lion King 1 1/2 reference? I still love Twilight Sparkle.

"And now, to celebrate the fact that we're all still here in one piece, give it up for Princess Twilight and her friends!" She said happily as a spotlight pointed at Twilight, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rarity, and even Flash.

You forgotten about spike.

Why is there a slice of life tag when the original movie was an adventure story?

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