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Hey guys my first story is kinda cool but sad. Also I will be making more chapters along the way its just they will take awhile to make each chapter. Give me ideas and suggestions in the comments. Also let me know your opinion on the story k and enjoy my first story I hope you like it
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Hello 2k. If you read my comment in your main profile. My name's Warhorse. I read your thing here and I can tell you need help. Both your writing as well as your knowledge of the big G man. If you want I could help you, in return to make this better than I thought I could do. What do you say?
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Sorry if I don't respond to your comments to quickly. I'm at work right now but I'll talk to you this weekend so sorry.
Huh, already gaining subjects, eh? But I'll talk to you on the weekend by your reqeust.
I'm liking this story.
First off 2k, you have a lot of errors in your spelling and writing.
Second, I was hoping Ocellus wouldn't die, but you were right.
And thirdly, this demands retribution. Not to sound like Celebrimbor from Shadow of War. But if we allow one of own getting attacked without retribution, it is a sign of weakness. Both your army as well as the enemy looking for ways to dismantle your growing power.
Please PM me.
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What was I right about
Well here it is a new chapter hope you enjoy
Okay, this part is not only total Bullshit! But because, it ruined the story for me.
Not only you brutally killed Ocellus out of nowhere, in just a few first chapters? Why did you do that our poor ladybug like that?
But now, you pull this stupid "punishment plot" against poor Godzilla? WHY do you do this to him!? He has every freaking right to avenge his daughter and his other subject from that changeling queen bitch and her assassin. ( Why is his "mother" being a bitch defending that changeling queen bitch!? )
And IF he doesn't attack, then his new subjects will be mad about it too that he didn't declare justified vengeance.
You made a rather ridiculous scenario where he's screwed if he doesn't, but he's still screwed if he does it? That makes no damn sense!?
Then, you created this "Mother" out of nowhere? Godzilla doesn't have a "mother" in canon!?
This ain't Beauty and the Beast!? Why make this stupid curse where it can only be broken with "true love". When he doesn't even deserved that curse or be punished in the first place!?
It's rather f***ed up for the "mother" to punish Godzilla for trying to avenge his own adopted daughter and other subject from the real villains? What kind of "lesson" is that!?
Besides, if this "mother" did created Godzilla, then she must come from Earth.
If that's the case, then why the hell is she in Equis/Equestria too!? This ain't YOUR planet, stupid bitch. Why are you defending it? It makes more sense Faust was here instead.
Now, I'm actually tempted to see Godzilla tear his fake "mother" bitch apart for the audacity to accusing him to be guilty for avenging his own freaking daughter and other subject!!!!????
What, does she expect Godzilla to do nothing? He will get in trouble by his own subjects instead, if he doesn't do crap anyways.
And she also has audacity to think she could kill Godzilla whatever she wants to!? He's Godzilla! I like to see this stupid bitch try!!!!!
I know you're the author, and this is your first story. But this part is totally ridiculous that I don't want to read this anymore.
Now like I said, if you don't want to rectify this silly mistake. That's probably "fine". But then, I'm just get out of here and be out of your hair.
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So first of all I did say in chapter two or three in the authors note that some of this stuff is not Canon to the show or same as the characters. Second if you want to know who this quote unquote b***h is and why she punished him wait for further chapters. But I do appreciate you comment and feed back. If I make other stories the feed back helps with not repeating the same mistakes that is all
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I still feel like Ocellus AND Godzilla didn't deserve there "fates".
( I mean, the summary literally talks about her and Godzilla bonding, but you immediately killed her in the first few chapters!? So what was the point of making that summary if you're going to finish one of the main characters already!? )
And just as long as that "mother" gets what she freaking deserves by Godzilla. Then I'm might come back to read this to know why this happened to poor Godzilla. And even then, it still doesn't excuse her.
Because Godzilla did what he had to do to avenge his adopted daughter and her bodyguard. That Changeling Queen and her assassin deserve to die.
Don't know why the heck that "mother" is defending that kind of villain!!!???
It also makes me more pissed to see Godzilla is "afraid" of this "mother" imposter too!?
If the princesses and the mane six find out the truth I know about Godzilla's tragic story. I just hope they will all defend Godzilla, give that "mother" a piece of their own mind too!