Two solid chapters.
Things are really gonna get going now and I look forward to it.
A couple of things though.
A pinky is a finger while a Pinkie is a pony.
Also minitours should be minotaurs, though I am sure that they give lovely mini-tours of their labyrinths back home.

Thanks for the update!

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TY, spelling should be fixed.

That was fun!!

Looks like Twilight might have two magic rivals and a romantic rival. Good luck, fillies.

First was Twilight, She was sitting near one of the front corners looking ready as ever.

Thank god The typo (and it must've been one) from last chapter had me worried Twilight would be Male... You should probably go back and fix it.

Interesting story so far, but a lot of spelling and grammatical errors. Still, its an interesting story and that is what counts the most.

I wonder if its cannon that Twilight doesn't know her disguise?

A cannon is an artillery piece, the word you are looking for is canon

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A cannon is also a bone in a horse’s legs.

Meaning that, yes, ponies can’t do finger guns, but they can do hoof cannons!

This silly comment brought to you by and insomnia!

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Then there is the barrel where they keep the ammo.

First invention, Ballpoint pins.

Pens*

About half the class split off to follow Sunny while the rest left to meat up with their guardians.

Meet*

Hehe, way to ingratiate yourself to one of the mane seven. 😈

About half the class split off to follow Sunny while the rest left to meat up with their guardians. Starlight trotted up on my right and we share a comforting hip bump but before either of us could speak.

You used meat instead of meet here. Very different meanings. I'm really enjoying the fiction so far though.