Engine Cogwheels isn't sure about what to do with his life, so he randomly tries his luck at a certain apple orchard. He could never guess how much of an influence this little choice would have on the rest of his life.
(Applejack x OC)
(cover photo from the comics)
This is very good. I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Hope to see more of your chapters and remember:
Keep your dreams alive. Understand that achieving anything requires faith and belief in yourself, vision, hard work, determination, and dedication. Remember, all things are possible for those who believe.
Here's a song that will make you do whatever it takes. Enjoy!
https://youtu.be/HcNcOnIkQQU?si=ogvztfsVi4apDDV1
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Thanks so much :')
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You're welcome
So far, so good on this new chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Here's a song that will make you natural. Enjoy!
https://youtu.be/V5M2WZiAy6k?si=dpi2yVGHghlnDr1_
I like it! Maybe add some full paragraph spaces between dialogue points to make it look more uniform, but that’s all for constructive criticism so far.