After more than nine hundred years of losing beloved ponies to her, Celestia finds herself alone in a huge palace, surrounded by guards that served more as decoration. And soon after receiving the news that an entire village was saved from a landslide, the Princess is surprised by a filly who has been bestowed with the powers of an alicorn.
Celestia sees in the filly a series of possibilities and potential to become a princess, now will this little light amidst the darkness of her life be maintained?
COVER MADE BY ME!
Chapters (3)
Some slight misspellings and some incorrect pronouns, but it's not bad. Interesting choice to change how Cadance ascended.
That was a good first chapter goodluck with the rest of it.
not bad
I was stuck on my story on Cadance but got the ball rolling and off to a good start on the first try.my advice find inspersion but stay creative.
fill the gaps and stay liquid.
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I should have looked at this before publishing the story.
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I'll try, I'm afraid I'll end up getting stuck in this story and simply have to delete it.
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dont sweat it take you time your on a good start do you want any suggestions for your story
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Yes, I would love any suggestions :)
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Suggestion a chapter or two on cadence learning to to us her horn and dealing with prince useless blood along with princess life along with sun but convincing her self she won’t mess up this time add a time skip here and there and if I’m not mistaken in the story description it Sade there were dark forces at play right. If so don’t use chrysalis she comes during the wedding if i remember correctly.
By the way, where do you want the store to stop before she goes into the school and me starting armor or after your choice, of course and your story, I’m just suggesting
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I don't intend to use Chrysalis in this story, I feel that it would be disconnected to use her with the story I plan.I'll keep in mind Cadance learning to use her horn (which I had thought about a bit) and her interactions with the useless blood prince. I think it would be fun to work with the reality check of each of them.
I'm not sure at what point in Cadance's life I want to end the story, I think it's something to think about during development, I don't want to rush or prolong things too much.
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Famous last words
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I ended up doing this, right?
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Not yet. But some authors don't know when to end the story and keep on going. Each story has a 1,000-chapter limit. But you're insane if you make a story that long.
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Ah yes, I thought I had rushed the events of the chapter too much. I think it's really crazy for someone to write a story with up to 1,000 chapters or more than 40.