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Princess Celestia sent Twilight Sparkle and her assistant, Spike, to Ponyville To check that all preparations were ready for the Summer Sun Celebration. Like in the series, Twilight Sparkle didn't care about making any new friends. Yet, she met the five colts who would improve her life, bringing confusion, friendship, love, and frustration into it. What adventures await Twilight and her newfound friends? Only time will tell.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 8 )

Dusk Shine in pursuit of Happiness reverse
getting it on read it later.

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As well as "The Secret Love Life of Dusk Shine". Both have i8dentical plots.

A reverse tale using Twilight instead of Dusk could be interesting, but could also become quite sexy, if not porn. As long as the author keeps it mild, I'd be curious to see how this tale develops...

Then again, I have no problem if things turn sexy....except for the "E" rating, of course.

That sounds like a reverse harem.

I feel bad for the guard. It sounds like he needs a friend to talk to or therapist.

I don't know what came over me but Twilight hates Rainbow Blitz now xddd

If I was Twilight I would hate him to, I would feel very uncomfortable with someone flirting with me and acting like the way he did, if I was a girl or course.


I was expecting to see the male version of Pinkie Pie first, I'm a little happy that the story is different from season 1 episode 1 already, usually most Author's who recreate Twilight meeting her new friends for the first time usually doesn't really "recreate" per se, and instead just copy off Season 1 episode 1 word for word, it makes the story boring very fast and nobody likes that.

This is the first ever story I came across where Twilight is the only mare of the main 6, usually either Twilight is the only colt of the main 6 or everyone of the main 6 is a colt.

Definitely unique and I'm already interested in the story.

He walked up to Twilight and Spike, "Howdy there, name's Applejack, but I reckon if we're close enough, you call me Aj." The stallion smiled politely at Twilight. Twilight, however, has her jaw dropped. She didn't know how to react to her heart beating. She had never felt that way in her life. She looked at the stallion with blushing eyes and looked to his left. Twilight saw Spike eating another pile of food given by the Sweet Apple Acre ponies. That made her shake her head aggressively and jump right back into reality.

AppleJack is probably the only one who would never have her name changed even as a male since it kind sounds like a name for female and male at the same time and someone agrees.

Rainbow Dash is another one.

Twilight looked at her one and only friend and brother, aside from her teacher, formal foal-sitter and big brother. She smiled, "It's alright, Spike. Not every day has to work out just as planned; there's got to be something to ruin a beautiful day. Besides, can the day get any worse?"

...Really? Really? Are you frickin kidding me?

Twilight went to Spike's ears and whispered enthusiastically, "This is your chance to get the love of your life!" She wanted to play cupid like her former foal-sitter, Princess Cadence.

For someone so smart and loves reading, she is so dumb at reading someone's face.

Elusive, jolted by the sudden yelling, furrowed his brows. Is there something wrong he had done to make the mare shout? After Elusive analyzed what had happened, his eyes widened by the realization of scaring the poor mare. That is not how a gentlecolt should act. Lowering his head with shame. "Oh my, I-I am truly sorry, Miss Sparkle. I mean no harm." a faded light flashed before his eyes, and Elusive looked up at where Twilight stood, but no pony was there. He looked left and right just to find him alone in the bathroom.

Not the best first impression.



So Twilight already has feelings for AppleJack, and Elusive, Rainbow Blitz, and Butterscotch has some feelings towards Twilight.

I think a relationship between Butterscotch and Twilight would be interesting, so far he's my favorite out of the other 3 and I doubt the male version of Pinkie would be any better.

Please tell me they go with Twilight, because she won't be able to weild the elements without them, except magic probably.

Unless it's one of those stories where Twilight bears all 6 elements of harmony, I love those stories.

Rainbow Blitz's eyes focused on the ground. His mind was racing with solutions and counter-problems that would arise from those solutions. He widened his eyes and lifted his head immediately, "I got it!"

Well next chapter will certainly be interesting.


Can't wait to read more.

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