In which Twist does her homework and finds a new friend.
Done in (roughly) an hour as a speedfic challenge under the requirements Twist, Luna, Sweet Apple Acres
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PatchworkPoltergeist
Some dork on the internet that likes ponies and flower symbolism way too much.
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Awwww.....
This is so sweet...
Aww, this was cute. And I think the cuteness was heightened by the fact that Twist had no idea who she was hanging out with.
Also, I can sympathize about the glasses -- I broke a pair when I was about eight by dropping them in the driveway in the middle of the winter. It was so cold that the plastic frames were really brittle and pretty much shattered. So yes, I totally understand that kind of panic.
Really well-written, especially in just an hour.
Keep up the great writing.
Really touching and well-written story, poor Twist doesn't get enough fics!
Im a sucker for a Twist Story <3 *Adds to read later*
D'AWWWWWWWWW
Awsome. I'm a sucker for Luna fics...an excellent job sir
Keep up the good work.
Yeeees. I knew when I suggested Luna and Twist, that you'd do something magnificent. I'm so glad you posted this.
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Second. Such a sweet little story, especially in the time we have been allotting ourselves for these speedfics. Bravo!
Hmm. I like this but at the same time I feel like something is missing. I gotta think about this for a while.
As others have said, so cute! I really like how you follow Twist's thoughts.
Aww...
It's Twistlove!
There were mainly sentence length problems with a couple comma errors, but I can't whine other than that.
Except for the Scootaloo episode not coming until December 8th.
Good story, on a related note.
Awwwww . . . nice.
For this and somewhere only we know you win a watch!
so cute and some great original ideas
That was so adawwwable my heart turned into candy
"Then Twist got her cutie mark and Apple Bloom didn’t really want to hang out anymore. But that was okay."
NO IT'S NOT, TWIST!!
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww~! *adds story to Twist* that was prethious
I always like a story with a twist, but I'm a little more difficult to impress with stories about the character of that name. But who other than Patchwork to pull off such a tall order? From anyone else, I would expect to find it boring, or overly precious. Luckily, while the tune may be simple, this piece hits the notes just right.
And I can definitely relate to the predicament with the glasses. I'm guessing you speak from experience there.
So cute! Luna and Twist were both great in this. ^^
This is a pretty good fanfic but I'm going to have to deduct infinity points for it having Twist in it
Very nice.
2544633 Why do so many people hate Twist?
How did you write this in an hour? Show me your ways.
Jeez. Talk about a plot twist!I
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What am I doing with my life?
I've long thought that Luna would find it easier to get acceptance from foals than she would from adults who are more set in their ways and their preconceptions.
Of course, she is always there to guard Her Little Ponies in the Night and, of course, in that time, she occasionally makes a friend. I doubt Nightmare Moon would never have existed if there had been ponies like that a thousand years ago.
D'awwwwww! This story is adorable!
Twist is adorable, Luna is adorable, put them together and the adorableness has been doubled!
Oh my God! This fic was so cute! 
Well written.
I see that either Twist was asleep or didn't pay attention during the NMM incident, or she didn't do the math between the NMM legend and the black alicorn that showed up and said the night was going to last, FOREVER!!!
Likely the latter.
Continuation! Continuation!
The simplicity of your writing made the paragraph in which Twist cries that more impactful.
Thanks for writing this.
I gotta say, the prose is great, the interactions between the characters are great (never thought of Twist and Luna interacting, but dang you know how to make them work), and to top it off you had a great title. I personally think the title to the story is important, especially when it gets your attention so you read it and it makes you appreciate it after you've read it. It has a lot of personality and is actually memorable. Reminds me of "All the Mortal Remains"
Edit: just realized you also wrote "Somewhere Only We Know" so I'm not surprised with how good this is lol
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Enjoying a nice story