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The Beast Wars are over, Megatron the rogue Predacon leader has been captured, and now the Maximals are heading home to Cybertron. That is until the transwarp drive rebels and threatens to destroy the Maximals.
Now their salvation lies with six rather familiar denizens of another world, but is saving the Maximals really in the best interest of Equestria?
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YES !!!! fINALLY A BEAST WARS CROSS OVER I FAV. YOU SO HARD!!!
Beginning Read now, Opinion pending...
Reading Concluded. Opinion processing...
Opinion formed. Dispensing.
Opinion: Satisfactory, with hope for continued quality. Characters seem to be handled correctly, pacing is done well for a starting chapter.
Concerns: I fear what will happen should you fall victim to the trap many others do, and leap right into action, or force one action after another, which has ruined crossovers that started otherwise fine before.
A beast wars and mlp Crossover???
EPIC WIN!!!! awesome work!!
There's a lot of minor spelling errors and capitalization errors in this story. Also, there's a few places where you have two-section names as two words (Black Arachnia, trans warp) in one area, but as one word (Blackarachnia, transwarp) in another. It's enough that it's... really jarring.
But I'm going to watch it for a while anyways because Beast Wars is great and a crossover would make me happy. Plus I want to see Waspinator meet Pinkie Pie, somehow.
1485075 Thank you for your concern, don't worry I'm going to ease the Maximals into the world before the action really starts. I'm also going to balance the daily life with the fighting, that's the intention anyway.
P.S. Why are you writing like that? Are you Soundwave?
1485550 Thank you for catching those errors, can you tell me where they are so I can fix them?
This is the second MLP/BW crossover I have seen. The first one is called Predator's Moon and I recommend that everypony reads it cuz it is AWESOME. This one looks like it is shaping up to be a masterpiece as well. I was wondering are any of the Maximals and ponies gonna be paired?
1485550 I'd like to point out that at the moment, Waspinator's still back on Earth, lording it over the proto-humans.
Oh man, this looks to be a great start to a great fic.
I haven't even read it yet and I know this is going to be awesome.
Edit: I was right
Was anyone else reading the maximals' lines in their voices? Can't wait to see what ol' dragonbutt has up his cybernetic sleeve this time.
minor quibble with the writing in relation to the transformers part of the fanfic. if its set during beast wars and from the look of things at least season three prior to the events of beast machines and you refer to the two factions as Autobots and Decepticons instead of Maximals and Predacons. I'm guessing this is an early draft so its not that big of an issue its more of a continuity issue in relation to beast wars compared to G1 transformers.
The Autobots and Decepticons upgraded as a side effect of "The Great Upgrade." to Maximals and Predacons which were more resource efficient forms
I have only one thing to say:
Oh, and take these:
another Beast Wars crossover added to the ranks for transformers crossovers. Lovely job so far. I would who's going to be paired up with who?
I know two pairings: Rattrap & Applejack, and Cheetor and Rainbow Dash!
1484860 Not to toot my own horn, but there's also this here. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/42547/Predator%27s-Moon
1485675 When you say paired, do you mean each one lives with one of the mane six, or do you mean romantically?
1486528 Five mustaches? I am honored.
1488228 What do you mean by pairings exactly?
1489985 I have read the first four chapters, and I have to say it is great.
1491808 Both actually.
1486466 This takes place maybe several hours after the end of the final episode, so that's when it is.
I don't remember ever mentioning Autobots aside from that the Omega Delta was an Autobot shuttle. If I accidentally got the factions messed up tell me where so I can fix it.
1491812 You'll find out later.
i think i may have glossed over it too quickly and not noticed that you switched as the story went on
1491808
By pairings, I mean team-ups, like buddies/friendship pairings. like how in the Transformers Prime crossover "Friendship is Prime," Twilight Sparkle was paired with Jack, Raf, and Miko; Applejack with Bulkhead; Rarity with Bumblebee; Pinkie Pie with Ratchet; Rainbow Dash with Arcee; and Fluttershy with Optimus Prime.
That kind of pairing.
1491999 I'll have to read that one. Well that does sort of happen, but I'll keep that to myself until later chapters.
1491808 Wow, thank you!
1494769 Any chance of a chapter five anytime soon?
1495410 As soon as I can cure my writer's block I'd love to jump back into it.
Embedded in the ruble
1. Rubble.
Interesting. Time to recap on the entire Beast Wars episodes
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I have a feeling there are going to be people who are opposed to my ponifing the maximals. I don't blame you, but this is just how I want the story to go. The reason I did that was to create an obstacle that the maximals had to deal with, and it will help create some interesting character moments, plus it relates to the mythology to be introduced later. I'm sorry if you hate me for taking this direction, but it's my story about things other people made and I'll do what I want.
If you do want to read a non ponified Beast Wars crossover I would suggest reading Predator's Moon written by Atomic Chinchilla. It's a very good story, though only four chapters so far. Maybe if he/she/it gets more readers Atomic Chinchilla can get around their Writers block.
Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to pine for my perfect score of zero dislikes.
I have no problem with the maximals being ponified. My only concern is will they be bale to transform again in the future? Will they find a way to make their new organic bodies into beast modes, and make them Cybertronian again? =3
Other than that, is story is turning out good. KEEP GOING!
Not only is this a cool cross-over, it's actually written in a feasible manner! Bravo! (or Brava!)
Like how you referenced both Prime and G1.
Megatron surviving would be the first normal think to happen today
1. Thing.
I am surprised that you decided to take this route. But I have no qualms about it either way, hope to see how it will go
oh, how we HATE the 'Gold Plastic Syndrome'
I am liking this story very much
1518770 I can tell you they will have their cybertronian forms again at some point, and perhaps even the mane 6.
1519044 That would be a bravo.
1519228 I enjoyed both series. So much I accidental keep reading Primal's voice as Peter Cullen.
1520425 Dang it, thought I got everything. Well I guess that's what I have you guys for.
1520666 GPS claimed my transmetal Megatron.
A few comments
1. Optimas should be an alicorn just because he's awesome.
2. Silverbolt should be a griffon because since he was a mix of two animals before it would make more sense.
3. Are we going to see any protoforms?
1523122
1. Then he would draw too much unneeded attention. Eh maybe when he dies and has to be resurrected again.
2. Pegasus is already two animals, horse and bird. You'll find out my other reasoning later on.
3. Maybe, they'll probably be obscure BW characters like Cybershark or Scarem. I'd have to come up with a reason they ended up in Equestria though.
1523718 I wholeheartedly agree with with your number one option... mainly with Optimus dying and getting ressurected again mainly cause, what kind of transformers show do you have if optimus doesn't die in it at least once?
1525893 He has yet to literally die in Transformers Prime
Ooh, the plot thickens.
Well dang, thanks to Gyvon I find myself adding yet another story to read on top of my already out of hoof and growing list.
1558930 1557674
Same. Darn Gyvon and his use of his powers of fame. *Hoofshake*
not enough the knock a pony off their feet
Which was a house that looked to be made entirely from sweets.”
Welcome to Ponivile Maximals
1. To.
2. Extra closing quotation mark at the end.
3. Ponyville.
Aaand excrement is going to hit the proverbial ceiling device...
1558930 I think I hand in that as well.
1560283 Primus Damn it. Why do I keep missing these?
1560850 Don't worry, stuff like this will happen to everypony (everyone?
)
1557674
Indeed.
BTW, how's that 3rd entry to your Transformers crossover doing? When we'll we be able to read it?
Nice work so far, but there are a number of minor mechanical errors throughout the story so I would strongly recommend getting someone to proofread this for you.
1561058 Everybot too.
1562013 If you mean chapter three it's out now. Normally I try to post a chapter weekly on Saturdays.
1562618 I might.
Sweet read. Hope one of the new maximals ends up as a griffin.
1566334 Well. . . .
"You, soldier! You re ot of uniform, put on some pants." freaking loved the Fowler you put in
1673614 I felt it was appropriate because ponies don't wear pants, not often anyhow.
1673623 well then:
She then set him down justt outside
1. Just.
Oh snap... Things are going to get ugly... Now the only question is; are there more coming for both sides?