This premise is so overdone and some of it seems like a total ripo-- >furniture ...wat
Edit: And now I'm disappointed because there was nothing to do with furniture. I was hoping for a fic where Chrysalis had decided to impersonate the matrimonial bed.
I assume you were trying to make a pun on the name Cadenza? It's not credenza. Cadenza is a musical term. Credenza is furniture.
The story itself is quite a different take on a familiar theme, but the revelations and emotions seem rushed and bogged down in exposition, losing believability. It loses a lot of believability anyway. I mean, changelings can fly.
Also, not sure about the sex tag. From the end of the chapter I assume Twilight will go around seducing her friends or something. Is that really worth dynamically changing a character for?
Whaat? I am bored of these changeling stories EVERYWHERE. Can I have a break? The writing is fairly good, apply to something original and you will have struck gold.
Let me guess: everyone gets laid except Spike. Again. The fact that it looks like he's going to spend the night with three fillies younger than him makes it look that way.
1670066 *directs you at the pile of fics she has also written*
I have never heard anyone around where I live pronounce the R in Credenza so... and there's also the Twilight goes insane fic where she uses a come to life spell on her Credenza and her armoire... My brain is a magical place.
1670122 Spike gets laid, eventually, but by whom may surprise you.
and yeah, I know changeling Twilight is "overdone" but I owed someone some clop and they wanted Changeling Twilight.
It was that or My LIttle Pony: Polyamoury is Complicated.
I at least hope that those of you ( 16700661669936 ) who are sick of said changelingtwi fics give this at least a little chance. I'm going to try to go a different direction than "seduce all friends, turn ponyville into hive."
Twilight nodded, her thirst for knowledge easily bludgeoning her thirst for revenge back into a dark hole to fester until she got over it, or turned into Nightmare Sparkle. She recalled that Pony Joe had a pool going, giving fifty-fifty odds.
LOL. I just imagined Pony Joe, Princess Celestia, and Princess Luna, watching Twilight lay waste to Canterlot, jaws dropped. And then Pony Joe turning to the two princesses, smug as hell, mumbling, "Pay up, both of ya". :P
You owed someone clop. No offense but if I reached a point in my life where I owed someone erotic fanfiction, I would need to take a good long look at just what went wrong to bring me to such a scenario.
1671935 Sounds... deliciously kinky. Or would that be kinkily delicious? I'm not sure. Anyway, Twilight just started clopping while Chyrsalis does things so I gotta get back to writing that.
Can't review propperly at present, but don't listen to the haters, they're so caught up in what the think is repetition that they failed to see the originality. For example, I've not yet seen one in which Chrysalis passes on her title. Keep going, you have my interest and an upvote. Honora Imperator
I would understand if Twilight was ready to sacrefice her usual life if it was ment to safe many changelings and Chrysalis herself, but what good it is to become the only changeling when rest changelings died, it sounds more like she is doing it only for knowleadge.
This was pretty good, but I think this would have been much more interesting if Chrysalis had just dumped her powers without exposition-ing anything. There could have been a lot of interesting plot in figuring out what the changlings used to be. And what they were now. And Chrysalis' motives for invading. Everything Chrysalis said would have been much more interesting being found out by Twilight and her new back-seat thinker Chrysalis. It would have made a great character arc for Twi to at first here new situation, then as she learned more about the changling history she'd be all . Then after acceptance she would now be able to lead the new hive to greatness! Along side .
Still pretty interesting. I think I'll keep reading.
Welcome to another performance of Sanity Theater. This week, Twilight Sparkle Asks a Question.
"What... will happen to me?"
"Well, since I've never died before I can't say for certain, but if I made the spell right nothing too bad. Of course I'm a self-confessed madmare and have been since beyond living memory, and probably longer since the sense of time is one of the first things to go, so for all you know I'm about to turn you into a big fish. Not one of those cute ones Fluttershy feeds to her animal friends, either, but one of the deep sea things that makes you question the meaning of life just by looking at it. I named him Mittens! Whaddya say?" "When you put it like that, how can I say no!" "Very easily." "Good point. Buck you, I'm going to the spa and a therapist!"
easily bludgeoning her thirst for revenge back into a dark hole to fester until she got over it, or turned into Nightmare Sparkle. She recalled that Pony Joe had a pool going, giving fifty-fifty odds.
I love it! Twilight Sparkle: powerful, intelligent, charismatic, big-hearted, and unstable.
This premise is so overdone and some of it seems like a total ripo--
>furniture
...wat
Edit: And now I'm disappointed because there was nothing to do with furniture. I was hoping for a fic where Chrysalis had decided to impersonate the matrimonial bed.
I assume you were trying to make a pun on the name Cadenza? It's not credenza. Cadenza is a musical term. Credenza is furniture.
The story itself is quite a different take on a familiar theme, but the revelations and emotions seem rushed and bogged down in exposition, losing believability. It loses a lot of believability anyway. I mean, changelings can fly.
Also, not sure about the sex tag. From the end of the chapter I assume Twilight will go around seducing her friends or something. Is that really worth dynamically changing a character for?
denver.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw4647-Rarity_Derelle_Duckface.png
Changeling Twilight! YesssssS!
Yeah, what's with the furniture? Is Cadence now Princess Mi Amore Credenza? (I admit it, I stole that pun from another story)
Whaat? I am bored of these changeling stories EVERYWHERE. Can I have a break? The writing is fairly good, apply to something original and you will have struck gold.
Hmm, interesting. I want more!
Let me guess: everyone gets laid except Spike. Again. The fact that it looks like he's going to spend the night with three fillies younger than him makes it look that way.
1670066
*directs you at the pile of fics she has also written*
I have never heard anyone around where I live pronounce the R in Credenza so... and there's also the Twilight goes insane fic where she uses a come to life spell on her Credenza and her armoire... My brain is a magical place.
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Spike gets laid, eventually, but by whom may surprise you.
and yeah, I know changeling Twilight is "overdone" but I owed someone some clop and they wanted Changeling Twilight.
It was that or My LIttle Pony: Polyamoury is Complicated.
I at least hope that those of you ( 1670066 1669936 ) who are sick of said changelingtwi fics give this at least a little chance. I'm going to try to go a different direction than "seduce all friends, turn ponyville into hive."
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This is the best face for Rarity.
LOL. I just imagined Pony Joe, Princess Celestia, and Princess Luna, watching Twilight lay waste to Canterlot, jaws dropped. And then Pony Joe turning to the two princesses, smug as hell, mumbling, "Pay up, both of ya". :P
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LOL. God, THAT would be awkward.
static.fimfiction.net/images/characters/shining-armor.png D: No shower is cold enough to remove the memories...
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You owed someone clop.
No offense but if I reached a point in my life where I owed someone erotic fanfiction, I would need to take a good long look at just what went wrong to bring me to such a scenario.
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It's less "I owe them because I'm a horrible failure at life" and more "I promised it to them like a year ago and never came through, so."
This's an interesting prospect. I wonder where this will go.
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To be fair, I intended the implication to be snarky ironic bemusement rather than "oh god why, FML."
My tongue was in my cheek so hard I was basically making out with myself. Which was pretty hot, actually.
1671935
Sounds... deliciously kinky. Or would that be kinkily delicious? I'm not sure. Anyway, Twilight just started clopping while Chyrsalis does things so I gotta get back to writing that.
A little rushed at times, but very very promising.
Can't review propperly at present, but don't listen to the haters, they're so caught up in what the think is repetition that they failed to see the originality.
For example, I've not yet seen one in which Chrysalis passes on her title.
Keep going, you have my interest and an upvote.
Honora Imperator
I like it.
Welll, that went quite extremaly fast.
I would understand if Twilight was ready to sacrefice her usual life if it was ment to safe many changelings and Chrysalis herself, but what good it is to become the only changeling when rest changelings died, it sounds more like she is doing it only for knowleadge.
Aww. Disappointed. Came for changeling furniture, none to be found.
I haven't read it yet but there are five words on your summary that is making me read it. "Rescue the piece of furniture"
Needs more actual furniture
This was pretty good, but I think this would have been much more interesting if Chrysalis had just dumped her powers without exposition-ing anything. There could have been a lot of interesting plot in figuring out what the changlings used to be. And what they were now. And Chrysalis' motives for invading. Everything Chrysalis said would have been much more interesting being found out by Twilight and her new back-seat thinker Chrysalis. It would have made a great character arc for Twi to at first here new situation, then as she learned more about the changling history she'd be all . Then after acceptance she would now be able to lead the new hive to greatness! Along side .
Still pretty interesting. I think I'll keep reading.
1871052 Eeyup.
she took that very well, wonder how Twilight's friends will react?
And so the matrix of leadership was passed on.
"Twilight, I must know, will you help you me? My time is running out..."
Isn't Chrysalis looking for Twilight to Chrysalis Twilight, not for Twilight to Twilight Chrysalis?
I suppose they're ultimately the same, anyway you left an extra word in there.
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Fix'd, good eye.
Welcome to another performance of Sanity Theater. This week, Twilight Sparkle Asks a Question.
"Well, since I've never died before I can't say for certain, but if I made the spell right nothing too bad. Of course I'm a self-confessed madmare and have been since beyond living memory, and probably longer since the sense of time is one of the first things to go, so for all you know I'm about to turn you into a big fish. Not one of those cute ones Fluttershy feeds to her animal friends, either, but one of the deep sea things that makes you question the meaning of life just by looking at it. I named him Mittens! Whaddya say?"
"When you put it like that, how can I say no!"
"Very easily."
"Good point. Buck you, I'm going to the spa and a therapist!"
This has been a performance of Sanity Theater.
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If I could like a single comment more than once, it'd be up in the hundreds.
I love it! Twilight Sparkle: powerful, intelligent, charismatic, big-hearted, and unstable.
1734467 It is her thirst for knowledge and the fact she knows that the events at the wedding almost caused Genocide.
Heh, we understood who you meant by furniture in the story description, but not in the way you meant it. Still amusing though.