Bushfires, floods, cyclones and drought. All at the same time. Australia is trying to kill us all.
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After her disappearance three months prior, Rarity finds her way back home. Of course, this raises several important questions. Where was she? What did she do? Why is she wearing bloodstained armour? And who is this "Wanderer" she traveled with?
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As a Masked Psychopath once said,
"IT'S TIME, for a good old fashion SLAP AND CRAP."
Let the violence commence!
KRIS ADORES THE IDEA OF THIS, IT IS AMAZING. KRIS THINKS YOU ARE A GENIUS TONY
Keep 'em comin tony you're the best at these
Getting dropped in Fallout would have to be the worst for Rarity. I mean, all that dirt and grime and... icky stuff. And her poor mane!
This will take several trips to the spa, starting now!
I wander what Wanderer is up to :P
I like this story. I'm still trying to wrap my head around Rarity actually being useful
Well... this is gonna be interesting.
I can't wait to see where this story goes.
Ooohhh. This, I like this. Especially because it is Rarity. Excellent chapter, and cannot wait for more. Fleshing out ideas for my own FO:E.
I'll keep an eye out for a pic of Rarity in combat armor/barding/whatever.
These are my favorite style of crossover story. Take pony, drop them into incredibly violent environment, watch them flail and struggle to survive. It's great.
You did it. You actually did it. You crazy bastard.
So you did do it. Very nice.
If this is going to be anything like Light Wanderings, then I wholeheartedly approve.
We always need more, "ponies get trapped in Fallout and return irrevocably changed" fics.
Kinda short but what the hay -instafaves-
COVER PIC
Read the chapter. Like it so far.
Eagerly anticipate more.
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Yep. +1 to that.
Except mane should be short.
So far story seems to promise a lot. Like big car lot of trouble for Rarity.
it shall be lady like violence
1793663 yea i vote this pic too totally badass
I like where this is going.
Things should only ever be uploaded with a cover pic.
Even just a vector of Rarity would add that little bit of colour to entice readers.
I only say this because I love this story, and want it to get more views.
this reminds me of th' 'Wanderings' series i edit.
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i'm watching you.
This story can cure ugly. Job well done!
Oh my geebus! YES!
*Sigh*
Another story to follow. At least this one looks to be another few thousand words per chapter story instead or a great behemoth like everything else I seem to be following right now is.
And hey, this completes the holy trinity of pony and Fallout crossover fics too. We've got our Fallout Equestria and its spin-offs for the merged version, Wayward Courier and sequels for our "Fallout character in Equestria" story, and now this for our "Pony in Fallout world" entry, thus completing the set.
Let's see how this goes...
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Dammit. Got me again.
Okay, you've written some pretty good stuff in the past. Both Bear,Scribe, and Paladin and A Wayward Courier are on my favorites list. I also like On The Wings of Angles
The concept of the story is good. However, the execution could use some work. The forematting is sort of hard to read; I would suggest adding a space between each paragraph. Also, the dialogue at the beginning of the story and after the scene transitions seems out of place. Your descriptions could be improved somewhat, right now you're telling, not showing. I'm not sure how a group of diamond dogs have the upper hand over a group of royal guard, nor do I know what the dogs are armed with.
Introducing the story with a battle is a very good idea if pulled off well, but right now this needs some improvement. Some of Rarity's dialogue seems out of place. It seems like she's playing a videogame or that she's some hollywood action hero that talks in one-liners, not someone in an actually dangerous situation. Also, the dialogue used at the very beginning of the story and after the scene break also seems out of place; I would advise simply cutting it.
While it's completely understandable to have short chapters, the chapter is still less than 2000 words long. The story had barely started when it was over.
The idea is good, but the execution needs work.
Also, the Fimfiction comments section is, frankly, a hugbox. Users often post blind praise, regardless of the quality of a work. The comments section is not a good place to get an accurate view of how good your story is or where you need to improve. Do you have an editor or prereader?
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I'm pretty good on the editing side myself, but I would not turn down a prereader. Are you volunteering?
I will favourite this once FiMfiction stops acting up and allows me to favourite things again.
I LOVE IT
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Premature Peter describes me perfectly here.
Now this is a nice change. Rarity in Fallout 3 is a welcome idea that I really want to see. Please continue this story and make is as great, if not greater, than your other stories. Keep goin and stay golden^^
I have a good feeling about this
Question. How much different is the capital wasteland in this story? I mean, obviously, it takes place in a different continuity than your previous crossovers with Fallout. I'm just curious about how much has been changed.
Here's some art of Rarity in armor!!!
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Something random for the first comment.
1848328 A very well rounded comment. The link was indeed random and you were quite certainly first.
love it
I think I like this one better than the other Fallout fic you wrote.
Rarity:
From prissy fashionista, to ultra badass…
Heh, a Lone Wanderer named and modeled after Megan. I'm thinking that people have been remembering her more ever since Striker posted Savior of Worlds.
EDIT: I kinda changed this post from one whining about not being able to shoot Deathclaws in the eye.
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Engine limitations.
Loved it!
I can't wait to read the first meeting with the Lone Wanderer.
i don't think it is stupid megan is a reference to G1 right?
hey rarity? Do you even lift? Keep goin and stay golden^^
I'm interested to see how this goes, and it's very nice to see how someone besides Twilight does outside of her comfort zone. Oh and it's also nice to see the Capital Wasteland getting more love to, way to many fics are set in Vegas
'Megan'
I see what you did thar!
So many Mane Six in wasteland stories.
Not a single one of them is about Fluttershy.
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Because, Gambling. XD
Good chap. Can't wait for the next one. Is it wrong that I'm considering writing a Fallout Story now that I've read yours?