I understand it's not everypony's taste... makes me wonder how many of the downvotes are because they thought it was poorly written, and how many are simply "I don't like that sort of thing."
Hard to tell, but probably a number of them. I might suggest a hypnosis warning for those folks, in the summary. I thought it was quite well done, myself.
This is AMAZING!! Finally SOMEONE does a hypnosis story! In any case this could benefit from an extended series of showing Octys' slow decent into submission. This is good, checking other works now. http://cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/400x/29526447.jpg
these kinds of mind control fics are my crack, and this fandom is sorely lacking in them. by all means, please, make more fics like this! and if you've already written fics in this genre, i will definitely be checking them out.
I found myself randomly thinking of this story all bloody day after i read it, and it confuses me as to why. I think its because you have turned 2 of my favorite things against me in this. My love of music, aka bass, dubstep, wubs (not sure if they could really be considered the same thing) and my favorite pony vinyl....
good job. you unintentionally got this stuck in my head
1858858 I'm sorry if I ruined your day. Believe me, that was not my intention... I'll try to have better descriptions in future, to prevent that sort of thing from happening...
1859326 never said it was a bad thing. it opened up a new perspective to me and i find it .... interesting. vinyl scratch hypnosis using bass caught my eye and well... now whenever i listen to my music, i keep thinking im hearing something. im not joking either.
I read the entirety of the story, it was well written but admittedly it left a nasty taste in my mouth so to speak, I did read the hypnosis warning but I had hoped there'd be a better ending than Octavia being turned into a mindless pet, was harsh of Vinyl to take away her free will and make her quit the orchestra just to have a buck pet essentially. Again I'm not criticizing how it was writ as that was well done,just feel this story would benefit from a alternate ending chapter were Octavia escapes and Vinyl realizes how much she screwed up a good friendship for selfish reasons.
Well that was interesting. I must say, I was.... well, interested.
I understand it's not everypony's taste... makes me wonder how many of the downvotes are because they thought it was poorly written, and how many are simply "I don't like that sort of thing."
Hard to tell, but probably a number of them. I might suggest a hypnosis warning for those folks, in the summary. I thought it was quite well done, myself.
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Good idea. And I'm glad you thought so. :)
It put Scratch in a new light for me...guess she did like Tavi...just in the way an owner loves its pet I guess
um ok then that was something...
I liked it but damn was that messed up
Down! Down boner!!
Hypnosis. So many things can happen there.
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Sequel?! Haha... just kidding. :P
1849934 Up to you....if you decided to. Or maybe an alternate version where Octavia tricks Vinyl into listening to the music.
This is AMAZING!!
Finally SOMEONE does a hypnosis story!
In any case this could benefit from an extended series of showing Octys' slow decent into submission.
This is good, checking other works now.
http://cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/400x/29526447.jpg
omigosh YES.
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these kinds of mind control fics are my crack, and this fandom is sorely lacking in them. by all means, please, make more fics like this!
and if you've already written fics in this genre, i will definitely be checking them out.
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Your thoughts = My thoughts
I found myself randomly thinking of this story all bloody day after i read it, and it confuses me as to why. I think its because you have turned 2 of my favorite things against me in this.
My love of music, aka bass, dubstep, wubs (not sure if they could really be considered the same thing)
and my favorite pony vinyl....
good job. you unintentionally got this stuck in my head
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I'm sorry if I ruined your day. Believe me, that was not my intention...
I'll try to have better descriptions in future, to prevent that sort of thing from happening...
1859326 never said it was a bad thing.
it opened up a new perspective to me and i find it .... interesting. vinyl scratch hypnosis using bass caught my eye and well... now whenever i listen to my music, i keep thinking im hearing something. im not joking either.
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I know it says its complete and your the writer but i feel like there could be a chapter 2 in here but its just an opinion so *Shrugs*
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There will be at least two more chapters, since enough readers seem to like it. Soon...
1860080 Woo! Thank you
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That was... well, I don't have any words to describe it, so...
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(In a good way)
No not that good a way.
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really god, i need more...
I read the entirety of the story
I read the entirety of the story, it was well written but admittedly it left a nasty taste in my mouth so to speak, I did read the hypnosis warning but I had hoped there'd be a better ending than Octavia being turned into a mindless pet, was harsh of Vinyl to take away her free will and make her quit the orchestra just to have a buck pet essentially. Again I'm not criticizing how it was writ as that was well done,just feel this story would benefit from a alternate ending chapter were Octavia escapes and Vinyl realizes how much she screwed up a good friendship for selfish reasons.
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or at least a happy medium where Tavi could continue on her career, but be completely subservient to Vinyl.